On Fri, Sep 19, 2014 at 03:15:01AM -0400, Jaroslav Reznik wrote:
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> ----- Original Message -----
> > On Tue, Sep 09, 2014 at 09:46:07AM -0400, Christian Schaller wrote:
> > > Hi everyone,
> > > Here are some draft notes I prepared to try to help our marketing team
> > > build up some release notes and press material on the Fedora Workstation
> > > release.
> > > Already sent it to the Working Group members, but I thought I send it out
> > > to these two
> > > lists for further review and suggestions.
> >
> > I took a shot at revising Christian's notes, using the feedback from
> > the thread thus far. With this revision I tried to reduce the level
> > of formality, the amount of technical terminology, and overall
> > sentence length and complexity. I also introduced some bullet points
> > where I felt it made the text more readable. I also renamed the
> > Software tool here to "App Catalog" because the ease of the tool
does
> > remind me of e.g. a retail store catalog.
>
> Hi Paul,
> thanks - as we're now Go for Fedora 21 Alpha, please move it to the
> announcement wiki. For Alpha, I'd probably limit the scope of WS
> notes a bit, not to create a huge document nobody reads and add more
> details for final release. As we plan for final release to have own
> page for all products.
>
> Ideally on Monday, so then we can prepare text formatted version to
> be announced on Tuesday morning US time.
I forgot to link wiki -
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F21_Alpha_release_announcement
I understood these longer notes were intended for final release.
Maybe the WG members can confirm, and I'll fix/post as needed.
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