Re: Summit USB key doco

[Paul W. Frields]

On Thu, Aug 13, 2009 at 10:55:17AM -0400, Máirín Duffy wrote:
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>  > From: Máirín Duffy <mairin(a)linuxgrrl.com&gt;
>  > To: For discussions about marketing and expanding the Fedora user base
>  > <fedora-marketing-list(a)redhat.com&gt;
>  > Subject: Re: Summit USB key doco
>  > Date: Thu, 13 Aug 2009 10:39:27 -0400
>  > 
>  > On Wed, 2009-08-12 at 19:10 -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote:
>  > > I posted the document here, and if you see something vital missing
>  > > please let me know.  The finished product is due shortly.
>  > 
>  > woooo Scribus :) 
>  > 
>  > I copied the files into the design team collateral dir, I hope you don't
>  > mind!
>  > 
>  > http://fedorapeople.org/groups/designteam/Fedora%20Collateral/USB%20Key%
>  > 20Documentation/
>  > 
>  > Also, some quick feedback, take it or leave it :) None of it is
>  > critical, more stylistic so it may not be worth changing:
>  > 
>  > "You can even make changes as you go to make Fedora suit your needs."
>  > 
>  > there's two makes here, maybe instead "You can even make changes as you
>  > go to adapt Fedora to your needs."
>  > 
>  > "PowerPC based"
>  > 
>  > maybe should be "PowerPC-based"
>  > 
>  > "check out all the latest summit information through our handy
>  > download page."
>  > 
>  > might want to capitalize - "Summit"
>  > 
>  > "Just double­click the "Red Hat
>  > Summit 2009" icon on the desktop."
>  > 
>  > might be cool to throw a screenshot of the icon in so it's blazingly
>  > obvious 
Thanks Mo, I'm going to see if I can get the fixes in before press
time!

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