F19 Video Final Review

[nitesh narayan lal]

For the last few days me and zoltan were working on this video.
Please feel free to share your thoughts and suggestions, we really
need to make the changes asap.

Video on :https://vimeo.com/67735428
and the password is : niteshFedora19

-- 
Regards
Nitesh Narayan Lal

[Ruth Suehle]

I still would prefer we avoid the weird Star Wars mixed metaphor with the
person in IRC hunting the cat... there's a lot going on here. I'm also not
certain Robyn would be all that excited about being Princess Robyn. We
definitely can't say "Red Heat fighters."


On Sun, Jun 30, 2013 at 7:42 AM, nitesh narayan lal <
niteshnarayanlalleo(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:

>  For the last few days me and zoltan were working on this video.
>  Please feel free to share your thoughts and suggestions, we really
>  need to make the changes asap.
>
>  Video on :https://vimeo.com/67735428
>  and the password is : niteshFedora19
>
>  --
>  Regards
>  Nitesh Narayan Lal
>

[Matthew Miller]

On Sun, Jun 30, 2013 at 08:57:09AM -0400, Ruth Suehle wrote:
>  I still would prefer we avoid the weird Star Wars mixed metaphor with
> the
>  person in IRC hunting the cat... there's a lot going on here. I'm also not
>  certain Robyn would be all that excited about being Princess Robyn. We
>  definitely can't say "Red Heat fighters." 
On that same page, it appears that there's some bit about 'rebel
contributors' who apparently tried to steal Fedora's plans and put bugs in
the kernel. I know it's meant to be funny, but I don't think we should
promote a story of _internal_ conflict. If it's going to go with the Star
Wars theme, we should all be the "rebels" together.

There are also a lot of grammar and language errors. I know that we have a
global contributor base and English isn't everyone's first language, but for
an official video, we should make sure it is polished.



-- 
Matthew Miller  ☁☁☁  Fedora Cloud Architect  ☁☁☁  <mattdm(a)fedoraproject.org&gt;

[nitesh narayan lal]

Thanks for your feedback, that is the reason I need some help here
atleast with the text what I am using.
So that it could be made grammar and language error free.
Please let me know if anyone could provide me the text story which
could fit in the video.


On 6/30/13, Matthew Miller <mattdm(a)fedoraproject.org&gt; wrote:
>  On Sun, Jun 30, 2013 at 08:57:09AM -0400, Ruth Suehle wrote:
> > I still would prefer we avoid the weird Star Wars mixed metaphor with the
> > person in IRC hunting the cat... there's a lot going on here. I'm also
> > not
> > certain Robyn would be all that excited about being Princess Robyn. We
> > definitely can't say "Red Heat fighters."
>
>  On that same page, it appears that there's some bit about 'rebel
>  contributors' who apparently tried to steal Fedora's plans and put bugs in
>  the kernel. I know it's meant to be funny, but I don't think we should
>  promote a story of _internal_ conflict. If it's going to go with the Star
>  Wars theme, we should all be the "rebels" together.
>
>  There are also a lot of grammar and language errors. I know that we have a
>  global contributor base and English isn't everyone's first language, but
>  for
>  an official video, we should make sure it is polished.
>
>
>
>  --
>  Matthew Miller  ☁☁☁  Fedora Cloud Architect  ☁☁☁
>  <mattdm(a)fedoraproject.org&gt;
>  

-- 
Regards
Nitesh Narayan Lal