Paul W. Frields píše v Pá 17. 07. 2015 v 14:02 -0400:
On Fri, Jul 17, 2015 at 02:39:08PM +0200, Jiri Eischmann wrote:
> Paul W. Frields píše v Čt 16. 07. 2015 v 13:46 -0400:
> > On Wed, Jul 15, 2015 at 06:25:02PM -0400, Jiri Eischmann wrote:
> > > Hi, I've written an article on Telegram in Fedora. It should be
> > > saved in the Wordpress of Fedora Magazine. I'd like to ask for
> > > review, proof-reading, creating some neat banner for it, and
> > > publishing it according to editorial schedule if we have any.
> > Hi Jiří, I edited the article lightly, and saved it as a draft.
> > I
> > also left a number of comments in it for you to review (in
> > boldface
> > text, to make them easy to find). Feel free to ping me online
> > with
> > feedback or to discuss the comments.
> Thanks Paul,
> I'll work on the suggestion over the weekend. The article is mostly
> translation of my article originally released on fedora.cz, I can
> it more for the Fedora Magazine audience.
Sounds good. Let the team know here when you're ready for another
review, but also feel free to ping me on IRC personally and I'll try
to jump on it right away.
I rewrote the article based on your feedback. I added some more info
about the service itself, info about how to create an account and how
accounts work in Telegram, and the part about clients is now hopefully
clearer, too. There is no clear winner among clients, each has its
pros/cons, so I listed them all and focused on the advantages and
disadvantages and how to install them.
Ryan has already added the banner.
Can you please look at it one more time?