Re: [Magazine] Article Edited and Ready for Final Review

[Justin W. Flory]

On 02/07/2016 07:25 PM, Neville A. Cross wrote:
>  On Sun, February 7, 2016 4:17 pm, Justin W. Flory wrote:
> > On 02/07/2016 04:58 PM, charles profitt wrote:
> >
> >> I did not want to change the substance in the article written by
> >> William, but I think the language could be softened.
> >>
> >>
> >> ---- current ----
> >> Neville has a love-hate relationship with GNOME. All of his computers
> >> have it. The hate part comes from the changing nature of GNOME. The
> >> developers move functionality and do not do a good job of documenting
> >> where that feature went. Cross makes special note that the most annoying
> >> item is the “connect to server� function in Nautilus ----
> >>
> >>
> >> ---- possible revision ----
> >> Neville has a love-hate relationship with GNOME. While all of his
> >> computer run Ghome there are times when his productivity is impacted due
> >> to changes in where features are located. One example is the connect to
> >> server function in Nautilus. Neville believes that the issue could
> >> easily be resolved with better documentation with regards to changes.
> >> ----
> >>
> >>
> >> I think this keeps the substance roughly the same, but makes the
> >> message a bit more subtle.
> >>
> >> Thoughts?
> >>
> >
> > I'm personally +1 to this proposed revision. I think this is a better
> > compromise while still maintaining the original point intended by Neville.
> >
> >
> > Let's see if this sounds okay to Neville.
> >
>
>  I am in a rural area with bad coverage and even worse data on my cell.
>  
>  I keep using gnome because is what Fedora has as primary focus. As
>  ambassador I represent fedora and therefore I need to be able to talk to
>  people about gnome and show that it comes fluid, I am not guessing. Now is
>  workstation and I feel that is it expected to endorse it as ambassador.
>  Specially when everybody else in the local community is ditching gnome for
>  various different reasons.
>  
>  So, if you want to scratch all that and just write that I use wirkstation,
>  it if fine by me.
>  
>  The rewording is very good. If you want to keep some of the balanced view,
>  I think it is very diplomatic.
>  
>  Thanks for reviewing my interview.
>  
>  Neville 
Thanks for chiming in Neville -- with the above in mind, I believe using
Charles' revision will be best.

--
Cheers,
Justin W. Flory
jflory7(a)gmail.com

[Magazine] Article Edited and Ready for Final Review

[Sylvia Sánchez]

Yep. Agree.

On Sunday, 7 February 2016, Justin W. Flory <jflory7(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:

>  On 02/07/2016 07:25 PM, Neville A. Cross wrote:
>  > On Sun, February 7, 2016 4:17 pm, Justin W. Flory wrote:
>  >> On 02/07/2016 04:58 PM, charles profitt wrote:
>  >>
>  >>> I did not want to change the substance in the article written by
>  >>> William, but I think the language could be softened.
>  >>>
>  >>>
>  >>> ---- current ----
>  >>> Neville has a love-hate relationship with GNOME. All of his computers
>  >>> have it. The hate part comes from the changing nature of GNOME. The
>  >>> developers move functionality and do not do a good job of documenting
>  >>> where that feature went. Cross makes special note that the most
>  annoying
>  >>> item is the “connect to server† function in Nautilus ----
>  >>>
>  >>>
>  >>> ---- possible revision ----
>  >>> Neville has a love-hate relationship with GNOME. While all of his
>  >>> computer run Ghome there are times when his productivity is impacted
>  due
>  >>> to changes in where features are located. One example is the connect to
>  >>> server function in Nautilus. Neville believes that the issue could
>  >>> easily be resolved with better documentation with regards to changes.
>  >>> ----
>  >>>
>  >>>
>  >>> I think this keeps the substance roughly the same, but makes the
>  >>> message a bit more subtle.
>  >>>
>  >>> Thoughts?
>  >>>
>  >>
>  >> I'm personally +1 to this proposed revision. I think this is a better
>  >> compromise while still maintaining the original point intended by
>  Neville.
>  >>
>  >>
>  >> Let's see if this sounds okay to Neville.
>  >>
>  >
>  > I am in a rural area with bad coverage and even worse data on my cell.
>  >
>  > I keep using gnome because is what Fedora has as primary focus. As
>  > ambassador I represent fedora and therefore I need to be able to talk to
>  > people about gnome and show that it comes fluid, I am not guessing. Now
>  is
>  > workstation and I feel that is it expected to endorse it as ambassador.
>  > Specially when everybody else in the local community is ditching gnome
>  for
>  > various different reasons.
>  >
>  > So, if you want to scratch all that and just write that I use
>  wirkstation,
>  > it if fine by me.
>  >
>  > The rewording is very good. If you want to keep some of the balanced
>  view,
>  > I think it is very diplomatic.
>  >
>  > Thanks for reviewing my interview.
>  >
>  > Neville
>
>  Thanks for chiming in Neville -- with the above in mind, I believe using
>  Charles' revision will be best.
>
>  --
>  Cheers,
>  Justin W. Flory
>  jflory7(a)gmail.com <javascript:;>
>
>