On Thu, Aug 13, 2009 at 10:55:17AM -0400, Máirín Duffy wrote:
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> From: Máirín Duffy <mairin(a)linuxgrrl.com>
> To: For discussions about marketing and expanding the Fedora user base
> Subject: Re: Summit USB key doco
> Date: Thu, 13 Aug 2009 10:39:27 -0400
> On Wed, 2009-08-12 at 19:10 -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> > I posted the document here, and if you see something vital missing
> > please let me know. The finished product is due shortly.
> woooo Scribus :)
> I copied the files into the design team collateral dir, I hope you don't
> Also, some quick feedback, take it or leave it :) None of it is
> critical, more stylistic so it may not be worth changing:
> "You can even make changes as you go to make Fedora suit your needs."
> there's two makes here, maybe instead "You can even make changes as you
> go to adapt Fedora to your needs."
> "PowerPC based"
> maybe should be "PowerPC-based"
> "check out all the latest summit information through our handy
> download page."
> might want to capitalize - "Summit"
> "Just doubleclick the "Red Hat
> Summit 2009" icon on the desktop."
> might be cool to throw a screenshot of the icon in so it's blazingly
Thanks Mo, I'm going to see if I can get the fixes in before press
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