Release Validation Testing article

[Ryan Lerch]

HI all,

I have finished editing the release validation testing article.

I edited it down a fair bit to try to provide a better hook for users that
might want to get involved with Fedora by helping out with relvar testing.

If anyone else could also throw a quick eye over it from this perspective,
that would be useful. otherwise, if the original author is happy with the
edits, this should be ready to go out!

also added a featured image!

cheers,
ryanlerch

[Marketing] Re: Release Validation Testing article

[Sumantro Mukherjee]

----- Original Message -----
>  From: "Ryan Lerch" <rlerch(a)redhat.com&gt;
>  To: "Fedora Marketing team" <marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org&gt;
>  Sent: Monday, June 6, 2016 4:35:10 PM
>  Subject: [Marketing] Release Validation Testing article
>  
>  HI all,
>  
>  I have finished editing the release validation testing article.
>  
>  I edited it down a fair bit to try to provide a better hook for users that
>  might want to get involved with Fedora by helping out with relvar testing.
>  
>  If anyone else could also throw a quick eye over it from this perspective,
>  that would be useful. otherwise, if the original author is happy with the
>  edits, this should be ready to go out!
>  
>  also added a featured image!
>  
>  cheers,
>  ryanlerch
>   
Hey Ryan 
I went through and it look very good!

Thanks
Sumantro
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[Marketing] Re: Release Validation Testing article

[James Hogarth]

On 6 June 2016 at 12:33, Sumantro Mukherjee <sumukher(a)redhat.com&gt; wrote:

>  ----- Original Message -----
>  > From: "Ryan Lerch" <rlerch(a)redhat.com&gt;
>  > To: "Fedora Marketing team" <marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org&gt;
>  > Sent: Monday, June 6, 2016 4:35:10 PM
>  > Subject: [Marketing] Release Validation Testing article
>  >
>  > HI all,
>  >
>  > I have finished editing the release validation testing article.
>  >
>  > I edited it down a fair bit to try to provide a better hook for users
>  that
>  > might want to get involved with Fedora by helping out with relvar
>  testing.
>  >
>  > If anyone else could also throw a quick eye over it from this
>  perspective,
>  > that would be useful. otherwise, if the original author is happy with the
>  > edits, this should be ready to go out!
>  >
>  > also added a featured image!
>  >
>  > cheers,
>  > ryanlerch
>  >
>  Hey Ryan
>  I went through and it look very good!
>
>  Overall looks good - but the opening sentence felt a little hard to parse 
"If
you are looking for a way to get involved in helping to make Fedora,
 completing some test cases for Release Validation Testing  is a quick way
to get started helping Fedora."

The multiple helping fedora bit read a little awkwardly I thought   ...
s/to get started helping Fedora/to begin contributing/ ?

[Marketing] Re: Release Validation Testing article

[Sylvia Sánchez]

Hi!

My suggestion:
"If you're looking for a way to contribute to Fedora, what about
Release Validation Testing? Completing test cases is a quick way to
get started."
And then the explanation about what is RVT, what are test cases and so on.


Cheers,
Sylvia

[Marketing] Re: Release Validation Testing article

[Corey Sheldon]

On 06/06/2016 12:57 PM, Sylvia Sánchez wrote:
>  Hi!
>
>  My suggestion:
>  "If you're looking for a way to contribute to Fedora, what about
>  Release Validation Testing? Completing test cases is a quick way to
>  get started."
>  And then the explanation about what is RVT, what are test cases and so on.
>
>
>  Cheers,
>  Sylvia
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>  marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
>  https://lists.fedoraproject.org/admin/lists/[e-mail]... 
+ Few typo changes

+ Link for virt-manager

+ Corrected relval command syntax to include release and compose as
shown in screeenshot for completeness / correctness

otherwise looks good.

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[Marketing] Re: Release Validation Testing article

[Justin W. Flory]

On 06/06/2016 07:31 PM, Corey 'linuxmodder' Sheldon wrote:
>  On 06/06/2016 12:57 PM, Sylvia Sánchez wrote:
> > Hi!
> >
> > My suggestion:
> > "If you're looking for a way to contribute to Fedora, what about
> > Release Validation Testing? Completing test cases is a quick way to
> > get started."
> > And then the explanation about what is RVT, what are test cases and so on.
> >
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Sylvia
> > --
> > Fedora Marketing mailing list
> > marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
> > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/admin/lists/[e-mail]...
>
>  + Few typo changes
>
>  + Link for virt-manager
>
>  + Corrected relval command syntax to include release and compose as
>  shown in screeenshot for completeness / correctness
>
>  otherwise looks good.
>  
Thanks everyone for the peer review! I've added some feedback, made a 
few minor usage/mechanics edits, and I've scheduled it for Wednesday, 
June 8, 2016 at 8:00 UTC.

--
Cheers,
Justin W. Flory
jflory7(a)gmail.com

[Marketing] Re: Release Validation Testing article

[Ryan Lerch]

Thanks Justin!

I could not get in to the magazine to do the edits yeasterday, as the
magazine wordpress was down!

cheers,
ryanlerch

On Wed, Jun 8, 2016 at 6:58 AM, Justin W. Flory <jflory7(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:

>  On 06/06/2016 07:31 PM, Corey 'linuxmodder' Sheldon wrote:
>
> > On 06/06/2016 12:57 PM, Sylvia Sánchez wrote:
> >
> >> Hi!
> >>
> >> My suggestion:
> >> "If you're looking for a way to contribute to Fedora, what about
> >> Release Validation Testing? Completing test cases is a quick way to
> >> get started."
> >> And then the explanation about what is RVT, what are test cases and so
> >> on.
> >>
> >>
> >> Cheers,
> >> Sylvia
> >> --
> >> Fedora Marketing mailing list
> >> marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
> >>
> >> https://lists.fedoraproject.org/admin/lists/[e-mail]...
> >>
> >
> > + Few typo changes
> >
> > + Link for virt-manager
> >
> > + Corrected relval command syntax to include release and compose as
> > shown in screeenshot for completeness / correctness
> >
> > otherwise looks good.
> >
> >
>  Thanks everyone for the peer review! I've added some feedback, made a few
>  minor usage/mechanics edits, and I've scheduled it for Wednesday, June 8,
>  2016 at 8:00 UTC.
>
>  --
>  Cheers,
>  Justin W. Flory
>  jflory7(a)gmail.com
>
>
>  --
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>  marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
>
>  https://lists.fedoraproject.org/admin/lists/[e-mail]...
>

[Marketing] Re: Release Validation Testing article

[Sumantro Mukherjee]

Hey Justin and all the reviewers and editors

Thanks for publishing it !

Thanks
Sumantro

----- Original Message -----
> From: "Justin W. Flory" <jflory7(a)gmail.com&gt;
> To: marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
> Sent: Wednesday, June 8, 2016 2:28:32 AM
> Subject: [Marketing] Re: Release Validation Testing article
> 
> On 06/06/2016 07:31 PM, Corey 'linuxmodder' Sheldon wrote:
> > On 06/06/2016 12:57 PM, Sylvia Sánchez wrote:
> >> Hi!
> >>
> >> My suggestion:
> >> "If you're looking for a way to contribute to Fedora, what about
> >> Release Validation Testing? Completing test cases is a quick way to
> >> get started."
> >> And then the explanation about what is RVT, what are test cases and so on.
> >>
> >>
> >> Cheers,
> >> Sylvia
> >> --
> >> Fedora Marketing mailing list
> >> marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
> >>
https://lists.fedoraproject.org/admin/lists/[e-mail]...
> >
> > + Few typo changes
> >
> > + Link for virt-manager
> >
> > + Corrected relval command syntax to include release and compose as
> > shown in screeenshot for completeness / correctness
> >
> > otherwise looks good.
> >
> 
> Thanks everyone for the peer review! I've added some feedback, made a
> few minor usage/mechanics edits, and I've scheduled it for Wednesday,
> June 8, 2016 at 8:00 UTC.
> 
> --
> Cheers,
> Justin W. Flory
> jflory7(a)gmail.com
> 
> 
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[Marketing] Re: Release Validation Testing article

[Justin W. Flory]

On 06/08/2016 04:37 AM, Sumantro Mukherjee wrote:
>  Hey Justin and all the reviewers and editors
>
>  Thanks for publishing it !
>
>  Thanks
>  Sumantro 
Thanks for writing! I've also awarded you the Fedora Badge for writing 
for the Magazine. Feel free to ping me on IRC in a week or two to check 
the views on your article, and I can award you some more of the other 
badges depending on how many hits the article has. :)

>  ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Justin W. Flory" <jflory7(a)gmail.com&gt;
> > To: marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
> > Sent: Wednesday, June 8, 2016 2:28:32 AM
> > Subject: [Marketing] Re: Release Validation Testing article
> >
> > On 06/06/2016 07:31 PM, Corey 'linuxmodder' Sheldon wrote:
> >> On 06/06/2016 12:57 PM, Sylvia Sánchez wrote:
> >>> Hi!
> >>>
> >>> My suggestion:
> >>> "If you're looking for a way to contribute to Fedora, what about
> >>> Release Validation Testing? Completing test cases is a quick way to
> >>> get started."
> >>> And then the explanation about what is RVT, what are test cases and so on.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Cheers,
> >>> Sylvia
> >>> --
> >>> Fedora Marketing mailing list
> >>> marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
> >>>
> https://lists.fedoraproject.org/admin/lists/[e-mail]...
> >>
> >> + Few typo changes
> >>
> >> + Link for virt-manager
> >>
> >> + Corrected relval command syntax to include release and compose as
> >> shown in screeenshot for completeness / correctness
> >>
> >> otherwise looks good.
> >>
> >
> > Thanks everyone for the peer review! I've added some feedback, made a
> > few minor usage/mechanics edits, and I've scheduled it for Wednesday,
> > June 8, 2016 at 8:00 UTC.
> >
> > --
> > Cheers,
> > Justin W. Flory
> > jflory7(a)gmail.com
> > 
--
Cheers,
Justin W. Flory
jflory7(a)gmail.com