Stephen opened this FPC ticket: https://pagure.io/packaging-committee/issue/777
So, I'm stepping back from writing the draft... think it would just slow down the process, since you folks
are more clear on what you're wanting - and I'm fine with what both Stephen and Jason wrote previously.

On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 10:02 AM, Gerald B. Cox <gbcox@bzb.us> wrote:
FESCo has decided to review this topic at their next meeting.  I will hold off submitting
another draft pending the results of that discussion.


On Thu, Jun 21, 2018 at 5:05 PM, Gerald B. Cox <gbcox@bzb.us> wrote:


On Thu, Jun 21, 2018 at 3:14 PM, Jason L Tibbitts III <tibbs@math.uh.edu> wrote:
>>>>> "GBC" == Gerald B Cox <gbcox@bzb.us> writes:

To me this doesn't make much sense in the context in which you have put
it.  The existing hardware activation section is just this paragraph:
 ...
I don't disagree with the idea behind what you're proposing, but the
hardware activation section is quite the wrong place to put it.

It seems to me that a far more appropriate place would be in the
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Packaging:DefaultServices document
...

Completely agree.  I'll make the changes and repost another draft via email.

Thanks for you help Jason!