On 12/02/2014 10:49 AM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
As you guys are crafting improved notes, for better consistency, it
would be great to write in present tense about the release.
INCONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar will include special flavor crystals
that defy gravity and help you fly like Superman."
CONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar includes special flavor crystals that
defy gravity and help you fly like Superman."
Be sure to use passive voice too. Paul likes that.[1]
Best,
jzb
[1] May not be entirely true. Consult your attorney. Offer not valid in
Utah.
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