Hi Jakub,
I have completed writing my proposal on the topic "Implement a battery of unit tests for SSSD. Please review the proposal.
My application link : https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GSOC_2013/Student_Application_abhisheksingh
Thanks, Abhishek
On Sat, Apr 27, 2013 at 09:39:31PM +0530, Abhishek Singh wrote:
Hi Jakub,
I have completed writing my proposal on the topic "Implement a battery of unit tests for SSSD. Please review the proposal.
My application link : https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GSOC_2013/Student_Application_abhisheksingh
Thanks, Abhishek
I sent some suggestions (mostly grammar, some rewording etc) to Abishek in a private e-mail.
Hi Jakub,
I have got the diff patches sent by you and the changes have been done :) Should I submit it on melange now ?
Thank you!
On Sun, Apr 28, 2013 at 11:34 PM, Jakub Hrozek jhrozek@redhat.com wrote:
On Sat, Apr 27, 2013 at 09:39:31PM +0530, Abhishek Singh wrote:
Hi Jakub,
I have completed writing my proposal on the topic "Implement a battery of unit tests for SSSD. Please review the proposal.
My application link :
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GSOC_2013/Student_Application_abhisheksingh
Thanks, Abhishek
I sent some suggestions (mostly grammar, some rewording etc) to Abishek in a private e-mail. _______________________________________________ sssd-devel mailing list sssd-devel@lists.fedorahosted.org https://lists.fedorahosted.org/mailman/listinfo/sssd-devel
On Sun, Apr 28, 2013 at 11:44:01PM +0530, Abhishek Singh wrote:
Hi Jakub,
I have got the diff patches sent by you and the changes have been done :) Should I submit it on melange now ?
Thank you!
Hey Abhishek,
couple of more comments (and maybe the native speakers on this list would have more):
In the paragraph titled "Why do you want to work with the Fedora Project?", the last sentence sounds a little too excited for a application, but maybe that's just my English. Anyway, I don't really understand the word "lucid" in this context.
I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either "Project Week" or simply "Week".
I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ? Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a deliverable.
The rest looks good to me.
Hi,
I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either "Project Week" or simply "Week".
I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ? Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a deliverable.
changes have been done.
I don't really understand the word "lucid" in this context.
by lucid I mean to say that everything looks clear. Things are not over-focused, they are simple, clear yet attractive.
I have submitted my application on melange https://google-melange.appspot.com/gsoc/proposal/review/google/gsoc2013/abhi... It can still be edited. Your suggestions are highly appreciated.
Regards, Abhishek
On Mon, Apr 29, 2013 at 12:04 AM, Jakub Hrozek jhrozek@redhat.com wrote:
On Sun, Apr 28, 2013 at 11:44:01PM +0530, Abhishek Singh wrote:
Hi Jakub,
I have got the diff patches sent by you and the changes have been done :) Should I submit it on melange now ?
Thank you!
Hey Abhishek,
couple of more comments (and maybe the native speakers on this list would have more):
In the paragraph titled "Why do you want to work with the Fedora Project?", the last sentence sounds a little too excited for a application, but maybe that's just my English. Anyway, I don't really understand the word "lucid" in this context.
I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either "Project Week" or simply "Week".
I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ? Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a deliverable.
The rest looks good to me. _______________________________________________ sssd-devel mailing list sssd-devel@lists.fedorahosted.org https://lists.fedorahosted.org/mailman/listinfo/sssd-devel
There is some changes some change in application url as suggested by Buddhike (Fedora org admin for GSoC 2013). Now wiki page for application content is https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GSOC_2013/Student_Application_abhisheksingh/I... other info is still at present at previous url https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GSOC_2013/Student_Application_abhisheksingh
On Mon, Apr 29, 2013 at 5:03 PM, Abhishek Singh < abhishekkumarsingh.cse@gmail.com> wrote:
Hi,
I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either "Project Week" or simply "Week".
I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ? Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a deliverable.
changes have been done.
I don't really understand the word "lucid" in this context.
by lucid I mean to say that everything looks clear. Things are not over-focused, they are simple, clear yet attractive.
I have submitted my application on melange https://google-melange.appspot.com/gsoc/proposal/review/google/gsoc2013/abhi... It can still be edited. Your suggestions are highly appreciated.
Regards, Abhishek
On Mon, Apr 29, 2013 at 12:04 AM, Jakub Hrozek jhrozek@redhat.com wrote:
On Sun, Apr 28, 2013 at 11:44:01PM +0530, Abhishek Singh wrote:
Hi Jakub,
I have got the diff patches sent by you and the changes have been done
:)
Should I submit it on melange now ?
Thank you!
Hey Abhishek,
couple of more comments (and maybe the native speakers on this list would have more):
In the paragraph titled "Why do you want to work with the Fedora Project?", the last sentence sounds a little too excited for a application, but maybe that's just my English. Anyway, I don't really understand the word "lucid" in this context.
I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either "Project Week" or simply "Week".
I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ? Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a deliverable.
The rest looks good to me. _______________________________________________ sssd-devel mailing list sssd-devel@lists.fedorahosted.org https://lists.fedorahosted.org/mailman/listinfo/sssd-devel
On Tue, Apr 30, 2013 at 12:58:09AM +0530, Abhishek Singh wrote:
There is some changes some change in application url as suggested by Buddhike (Fedora org admin for GSoC 2013). Now wiki page for application content is https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GSOC_2013/Student_Application_abhisheksingh/I... other info is still at present at previous url https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GSOC_2013/Student_Application_abhisheksingh
Just for the record, Abhishek's application is now at Melange and I put in my review comments (which were positive).
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