Re: [PATCH] Fix English-language style/usage in Cloud download page

[Paul W. Frields]

*UGH!* I messed up the patch. Let me try again. :-)


On Fri, May 18, 2012 at 10:55:35AM -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote:
>  From: "Paul W. Frields" <stickster(a)gmail.com&gt;
>  
>  * Cut down on exclamation marks
>  * Replace ellipsis character with three period (.) marks
>  * Fix incorrect wording
>  ---
>   fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html |    6 +++---
>   fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot                    |    6 +++---
>   2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
>  
>  diff --git a/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html
> b/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html
>  index bf9c063..3f1e316 100644
>  --- a/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html
>  +++ b/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html
>  @@ -274,10 +274,10 @@
>   
>                       <div id="cloud-versions">
>                           <noscript><a name="clouds"><hr
> /></a></noscript>
>  -                        <h3>${_('Fedora In The Clouds!')}</h3>
>  -                        <p>${_('… Let\'s your dreams be
> reallity!')}</p>
>  +                        <h3>${_('Fedora in ihe Clouds')}</h3>
>  +                        <p>${_('...Lets your dreams become
> reality!')}</p>
>                               <div class="grid_12 alpha omega">
>  -                                <h4 class="area-callout">${_('Fedora
> %(release)s Amazone EC2') %
> {'release':global_variables.release['curr_id']}}</h4>
>  +                                <h4 class="area-callout">${_('Fedora
> %(release)s Amazon EC2') %
> {'release':global_variables.release['curr_id']}}</h4>
>                               </div>
>   
>                               <div class="clear"></div>
>  diff --git a/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot b/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot
>  index ef53705..7d87a6b 100644
>  --- a/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot
>  +++ b/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot
>  @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ msgid ""
>   msgstr ""
>   "Project-Id-Version: PROJECT VERSION\n"
>   "Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: EMAIL@ADDRESS\n"
>  -"POT-Creation-Date: 2012-05-18 11:01+0200\n"
>  +"POT-Creation-Date: 2012-05-18 10:19-0400\n"
>   "PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n"
>   "Last-Translator: FULL NAME <EMAIL@ADDRESS>\n"
>   "Language-Team: LANGUAGE <LL(a)li.org&gt;\n&quot;
>  @@ -1080,11 +1080,11 @@ msgid ""
>   msgstr ""
>   
>   #: data/content/get-fedora-options.html:277
>  -msgid "Fedora In The Clouds!"
>  +msgid "Fedora in ihe Clouds"
>   msgstr ""
>   
>   #: data/content/get-fedora-options.html:278
>  -msgid "… Let's your dreams be reality!"
>  +msgid "...Lets your dreams become reality!"
>   msgstr ""
>   
>   #: data/content/get-fedora-options.html:280
>  -- 
>  1.7.10.1
>   
-- 
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