[PATCH 1/3] Provide editorial love for text, fixing style and grammar

[Paul W. Frields]

---
 .../data/content/security/index.html               |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
b/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
index e7c7be5..5f6c053 100644
--- a/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
+++ b/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ docs_url = [
 		</ul>
 		<!-- tab "panes" -->
 		<div class="panes">
-			<div><p>${_('The Fedora Security Spin is a livecd based on Fedora to
provide a safe test-environment for working on security-auditing, forensics and
penetration-testing, coupled with all the Fedora-Security features and tools.')}<br
/>
-			   ${_('The spin is maintained by a community of Security Testers and Developers.
It comes with the clean and fast openbox window manager and a customized menu to have all
the instruments one may need to follow a proper test-path. With the read-write rootfs, it
is possible to install software while the livecd is running. The Fedora liveusb-creator
provides an overlay feature to put the security-spin on an usb-stick so that the user can
install and update software - and can safe his test-results permanently.')}</p>
+			<div><p>${_('The Fedora Security Spin is a Live image based on Fedora
that provides a safe test-environment for working on security auditing, forensics and
penetration-testing, coupled with all the Fedora security features and tools.')}<br
/>
+			   ${_('The spin is maintained by a community of security testers and developers.
It comes with the clean and fast openbox window manager, and a customized menu that
includes all the instruments needed to follow a proper test path. With the read-write
rootfs, it is possible to install software while the Live image is running. The Fedora
liveusb-creator provides an overlay feature to put the Security Spin on a USB stick, so
you can install and update software and save your test results
permanently.')}</p>
 			    <h4>${_('Fedora Security Spin Screenshot')}</h4>
 			    <img src="http://jsimon.fedorapeople.org/securityspingrub.png"
target="_blank" alt="_blank" />
 			    <img src="http://jsimon.fedorapeople.org/securityspindesktop.png"
target="_blank" alt="_blank" style="width: 646px" />>
-- 
1.6.6

[PATCH 2/3] Fix para tags

[Paul W. Frields]

---
 .../data/content/security/index.html               |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
b/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
index 5f6c053..996b562 100644
--- a/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
+++ b/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ docs_url = [
 		</ul>
 		<!-- tab "panes" -->
 		<div class="panes">
-			<div><p>${_('The Fedora Security Spin is a Live image based on Fedora
that provides a safe test-environment for working on security auditing, forensics and
penetration-testing, coupled with all the Fedora security features and tools.')}<br
/>
-			   ${_('The spin is maintained by a community of security testers and developers.
It comes with the clean and fast openbox window manager, and a customized menu that
includes all the instruments needed to follow a proper test path. With the read-write
rootfs, it is possible to install software while the Live image is running. The Fedora
liveusb-creator provides an overlay feature to put the Security Spin on a USB stick, so
you can install and update software and save your test results
permanently.')}</p>
+			<div><p>${_('The Fedora Security Spin is a Live image based on Fedora
that provides a safe test-environment for working on security auditing, forensics and
penetration-testing, coupled with all the Fedora security features and
tools.')}</p>
+			   <p>${_('The spin is maintained by a community of security testers and
developers. It comes with the clean and fast openbox window manager, and a customized menu
that includes all the instruments needed to follow a proper test path. With the read-write
rootfs, it is possible to install software while the Live image is running. The Fedora
liveusb-creator provides an overlay feature to put the Security Spin on a USB stick, so
you can install and update software and save your test results
permanently.')}</p>
 			    <h4>${_('Fedora Security Spin Screenshot')}</h4>
 			    <img src="http://jsimon.fedorapeople.org/securityspingrub.png"
target="_blank" alt="_blank" />
 			    <img src="http://jsimon.fedorapeople.org/securityspindesktop.png"
target="_blank" alt="_blank" style="width: 646px" />>
-- 
1.6.6

[PATCH 3/3] Add one additional language fix

[Paul W. Frields]

---
 .../data/content/security/index.html               |    2 +-
 1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)

diff --git a/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
b/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
index 996b562..ddf0eb6 100644
--- a/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
+++ b/spins.fedoraproject.org/data/content/security/index.html
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ docs_url = [
 		</ul>
 		<!-- tab "panes" -->
 		<div class="panes">
-			<div><p>${_('The Fedora Security Spin is a Live image based on Fedora
that provides a safe test-environment for working on security auditing, forensics and
penetration-testing, coupled with all the Fedora security features and
tools.')}</p>
+			<div><p>${_('The Fedora Security Spin is a Live image based on Fedora
that provides a safe test environment for working on security auditing, forensics, and
penetration-testing, coupled with Fedora security features and tools.')}</p>
 			   <p>${_('The spin is maintained by a community of security testers and
developers. It comes with the clean and fast openbox window manager, and a customized menu
that includes all the instruments needed to follow a proper test path. With the read-write
rootfs, it is possible to install software while the Live image is running. The Fedora
liveusb-creator provides an overlay feature to put the Security Spin on a USB stick, so
you can install and update software and save your test results
permanently.')}</p>
 			    <h4>${_('Fedora Security Spin Screenshot')}</h4>
 			    <img src="http://jsimon.fedorapeople.org/securityspingrub.png"
target="_blank" alt="_blank" />
-- 
1.6.6

[Ricky Zhou]

Sorry these fell off the radar, I've pushed them now.

Thanks for the patches!
Ricky