please review mockup (was Re: website mockups, what is fedora?)

[Paul W. Frields]

On Mon, Aug 24, 2009 at 03:56:00PM -0400, Bill Nottingham wrote:
> mairin at linuxgrrl.com (mairin at linuxgrrl.com) said: 
> > Please let me know if this mockup is an improvement over the other one and
> > helps.
> 
> I'm missing an earlier one to compare against... but it's certainly miles
> better than what's there now.
> 
> Minor comments:
> 
> - s/Need to upgrade/Already using/ ?
> - 'More download options' and 'Other options' seems redundant.
> - The light gray text gives an impression of the entire site running at 75%
>   opacity to me. Maybe I'm nuts.

The evolution was:

http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/temp/woot/page2.png
http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/temp/woot/getfpo-2.png
http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/temp/woot/getfpo-16.png

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