RFC: F21 Workstation flyer
sanjay.ankur at gmail.com
Thu Jan 8 21:15:55 UTC 2015
On Thu, 2015-01-08 at 09:15 -0500, Bastien Nocera wrote:
> A couple of comments:
> - I would add a version on the front page, as you have content that's
> version specific inside
Ah, makes sense. I can add that.
> - I would also clip the screenshots, not include whole desktops as
> likely not going to be printed with enough details to be
I noticed that the screenshots weren't too helpful. Do you think
removing the screenshots and using logos would be better? For example,
the devassistant logo instead of the screenshot? Even if I trim them to
only have the applications in there, they're still quite small.
> - the section about future versions should have more concrete details
> than what seems like a list of buzzwords.
I'll work on this. I shamelessly plagiarised the release announcement in
this version. We'll probably improve the text all over a bit.
Thanks for the feedback. More is always welcome:
Ankur Sinha "FranciscoD"
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