F23 Final release notes

Paul W. Frields stickster at gmail.com
Wed Oct 21 22:23:33 UTC 2015


On Wed, Oct 21, 2015 at 10:30:07AM -0400, Matthew Miller wrote:
> On Wed, Oct 14, 2015 at 03:57:40PM -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> > I started making notes for the F23 Final release of Workstation here:
> > <https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F23_Final_release_announcement#Fedora_Workstation>
> 
> I'd like to take most of this stuff *out* of the release annoucement,
> and move to release notes.
> 
> I'd like the annoucement to be mainly targeted at new or casual users,
> and for each of the editions, I think we want just
> 
>  - the quick elevator pitch (OS system for your laptop or desktop computer
>    targeted at developers)
> 
>  - a one-liner describing the most exciting new things (maybe that's
>    just "updated GNOME, which is much shinier")
> 
>  - an action statement — "For a better desktop experience which fits
>    your daily workflow, download Fedora Workstation now"
> 
> except, probably, different words.

Okey dokey, edits in.

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