Feedback needed : Fedora 15 Announcement

[Adam Williamson]

On Thu, 2011-05-19 at 14:42 +0530, Rahul Sundaram wrote:
> Hi
> 
> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_15_announcement
> 
> Let me know if you have any comments.  Feel free to edit the wiki
> directly if needed.

I went through and fixed up a few things. The only two that I suppose
might be reverted or controversial:

I changed LoveLock to Lovelock - I don't believe it's meant to be
CamelCased.

I changed 'elaborate' to 'powerful' when talking about systemd's
dependency resolution mechanism. 'Elaborate' has ambiguous connotations,
whereas those of 'powerful' are pretty straightforwardly positive.
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