install-guide fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml, 1.22, 1.23 fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml, 1.17, 1.18
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sat Dec 10 22:54:41 UTC 2005
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv19469
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml
fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml
Log Message:
Trivial style edits
Index: fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.22
retrieving revision 1.23
diff -u -r1.22 -r1.23
--- fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml 10 Dec 2005 17:51:38 -0000 1.22
+++ fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml 10 Dec 2005 22:54:33 -0000 1.23
@@ -293,8 +293,9 @@
<firstterm>netboot</firstterm>) is a standard that enables PCs
to use files on a server as a boot device. &FC; includes
utilities that allow it to function as a PXE server for other
- computers. This option enables you to install &FC; entirely over
- the network connection, using no physical media at all.
+ computers. You can use this option to install &FC; on a
+ PXE-enabled computer entirely over the network connection, using
+ no physical media at all.
</para>
</section>
@@ -396,7 +397,7 @@
</itemizedlist>
<para>
- This facility enables you to install &FC; on machines without
+ You can use this facility to install &FC; on machines without
using installation discs. For example, you may install &FC; on a
laptop with no CD or DVD drive by booting the machine with a USB
pen drive, and then using a hard drive as an installation source.
Index: fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.17
retrieving revision 1.18
diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18
--- fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 10 Dec 2005 17:51:39 -0000 1.17
+++ fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 10 Dec 2005 22:54:33 -0000 1.18
@@ -156,9 +156,9 @@
Once you have booted your computer, you may use ISO image files of
the &FED; discs to continue the installation process. The ISO
files must be located on a hard drive that is either internal to
- the computer, or attached to the machine by USB. This option
- enables you to install &FC; on computers that have neither a
- network connection, nor CD or DVD drives.
+ the computer, or attached to the machine by USB. You can use this
+ option to install &FC; on computers that have neither a network
+ connection nor CD or DVD drives.
</para>
<para>
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