release-notes/FC4 kernel.xml,1.11,1.12

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv5721

Modified Files:
	kernel.xml 
Log Message:
Very minor changes - ispell is your friend


Index: kernel.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/kernel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- kernel.xml	19 Jul 2005 04:24:07 -0000	1.11
+++ kernel.xml	19 Jul 2005 12:02:01 -0000	1.12
@@ -90,16 +90,17 @@
   </section>
   <!--
   <tip>
-    <title>Using <command>yum</command> to Uninstall Kernel
+    <title>Using <command>yum</command> to Remove Kernel
     Packages</title>
     <para>
       &FC; &LOCALVER; contains support for clustering systems using CMAN and GFS.
       These kernels require assistance from some user-space packages.
-      These packages are not removed when using <command>rpm -e</command> to uninstall older versions of the kernel packages.
+      These packages are not removed when using <command>rpm
+      -e</command> to remove older versions of the kernel packages.
     </para>
     <para>
-      When using <command>rpm -e kernel-<replaceable>&lt;version&gt;</replaceable> </command> to uninstall the kernel, you must also remove the assisting user-space packages.  You may wish to consider a dependecy resolving tool such as <command>yum remove kernel-<replaceable>&lt;version&gt;</replaceable> </command>.
-      This automatically removes any dependant packages.
+      When using <command>rpm -e kernel-<replaceable>&lt;version&gt;</replaceable> </command> to remove the kernel, you must also remove the assisting user-space packages.  You may wish to consider a dependency resolving tool such as <command>yum remove kernel-<replaceable>&lt;version&gt;</replaceable> </command>.
+      This automatically removes any dependent packages.
     </para>
   </tip>
   -->
@@ -236,7 +237,7 @@
         <para>to this:</para>
         <screen width="60">EXTRAVERSION = -1.234_FC4</screen>
         <para>
-          that is, substitude everything from the final dash onward.
+          that is, substitute everything from the final dash onward.
         </para>
       </step>
       <step>
@@ -279,7 +280,7 @@
     </para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-kernel-coop">
-    <title>Userspace Dependancies on the Kernel</title>
+    <title>User Space Dependencies on the Kernel</title>
     <para>
       &DISTRO; adds support for clustered systems. This requires a
       special kernel that works in conjunction with some user-space
@@ -287,14 +288,14 @@
       such a kernel, perhaps after an update, you
       <emphasis>cannot</emphasis> simply use the <command>rpm -e
   kernel-<replaceable>&lt;version&gt;</replaceable></command>
-      command as in earlier distributions because these userspace
+      command as in earlier distributions because these user space
       packages depend on the kernel package. You may either list both
-      the kernel package and its userspace dependant packages on the
+      the kernel package and its user space dependent packages on the
       <command>rpm -e</command> command, or you may wish to use the
       <command>yum remove
   kernel-<replaceable>&lt;version&gt;</replaceable></command>
       command instead since <command>yum</command> automatically removes
-      dependant packages if necesssary.
+      dependent packages if necessary.
     </para>
   </section>
 </section>