yum-software-management yum-software-management-en.xml,1.19,1.20

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/yum-software-management
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv25413/yum-software-management

Modified Files:
	yum-software-management-en.xml 
Log Message:
All the changes I could make in the 90 seconds of editing time I had... :-)


Index: yum-software-management-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/yum-software-management/yum-software-management-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.19
retrieving revision 1.20
diff -u -r1.19 -r1.20
--- yum-software-management-en.xml	21 Jul 2005 16:54:45 -0000	1.19
+++ yum-software-management-en.xml	22 Jul 2005 22:31:08 -0000	1.20
@@ -140,8 +140,7 @@
       </para>
 <screen>
 <userinput>man yum
-man yum.conf
-</userinput>
+man yum.conf</userinput>
 </screen>
       <indexterm>
         <primary>yum</primary>
@@ -238,24 +237,23 @@
       <para>
         A <firstterm>repository</firstterm> is a prepared directory or
         Website that contains software packages and index files.
-        Software management utilities like <command>yum</command>
+        Software management utilities such as <command>yum</command>
         automatically locate and obtain the correct RPM packages from
         these repositories. This method frees you from having to
-        manually find and install new applications or updates: you may
-        use a single command to update all of the software that makes up
-        your system, or to search for new software by specifying
-        criteria. In each case the management utility connects to the
-        repositories that it is configured to use, and checks the
-        indexes that they provide to find the correct packages.
+        manually find and install new applications or updates.  You may
+        use a single command to update all system software, or search
+        for new software by specifying criteria. In each case the
+        management utility connects to the configured repositories and
+        checks their indexes to find the correct packages.
       </para>
 
       <para>
         The package management utilities in &FC; are automatically
-        configured to use the network of repository servers maintained
-        by the &FP;. These repositories hold both the software included
-        with &FC;, and a large selection of additional software, known
-        as &FEX;. Third-party software developers also provide
-        repositories for their &FED; compatible packages.
+        configured to use the network of repositories maintained by the
+        &FP;. These repositories contain the software included with &FC;
+        and a large selection of additional software known as
+        &FEX;. Third-party software developers also provide repositories
+        for their &FED; compatible packages.
       </para>
 
       <note>