release-notes/FC4 RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml, 1.12, 1.13 splash.xml, 1.11, 1.12

Karsten Wade (kwade) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Tue Jul 26 21:07:09 UTC 2005


Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv32540

Modified Files:
	RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml splash.xml 
Log Message:
Better wording, close to project goal.


Index: RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
--- RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml	23 Jul 2005 03:31:13 -0000	1.12
+++ RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml	26 Jul 2005 21:07:06 -0000	1.13
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 
 <!-- *************** Local entities *************** -->
 
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "RELEASE-NOTES-&FCX;&DISTROVER; (2005-07-22-T04:20-0700)"> <!-- version of manual and date -->
+<!ENTITY BOOKID "RELEASE-NOTES-&FCX;&DISTROVER; (2005-07-26-T16:20-0700)"> <!-- version of manual and date -->
 <!ENTITY LOCALVER "4">  <!-- Set value to your choice, when guide version is out -->
 <!-- of sync with FC release, use instead of FEDVER or FEDTESTVER  -->
 <!ENTITY NAME "Fedora"> <!-- The project's (and software's) basic name -->


Index: splash.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/splash.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- splash.xml	23 Jul 2005 03:31:13 -0000	1.11
+++ splash.xml	26 Jul 2005 21:07:06 -0000	1.12
@@ -339,8 +339,8 @@
       The unofficial <ulink
 	url="http://fedorafaq.org">http://fedorafaq.org</ulink> provides
       useful answers on commonly asked questions. However, these are
-      completely unsupported by the &FP;. The &FP; recommends using free
-      and open source software alternatives whenever possible.
+      completely unsupported by the &FP;. The &FP; encourages using free
+      and open source software..
     </para>
     <para>
       The binary only drivers can be acquired from the vendors. You can




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