release-notes/FC4 RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml, 1.12, 1.13 splash.xml, 1.11, 1.12
Karsten Wade (kwade)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Tue Jul 26 21:07:09 UTC 2005
Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv32540
Modified Files:
RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml splash.xml
Log Message:
Better wording, close to project goal.
Index: RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
--- RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml 23 Jul 2005 03:31:13 -0000 1.12
+++ RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml 26 Jul 2005 21:07:06 -0000 1.13
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
<!-- *************** Local entities *************** -->
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "RELEASE-NOTES-&FCX;&DISTROVER; (2005-07-22-T04:20-0700)"> <!-- version of manual and date -->
+<!ENTITY BOOKID "RELEASE-NOTES-&FCX;&DISTROVER; (2005-07-26-T16:20-0700)"> <!-- version of manual and date -->
<!ENTITY LOCALVER "4"> <!-- Set value to your choice, when guide version is out -->
<!-- of sync with FC release, use instead of FEDVER or FEDTESTVER -->
<!ENTITY NAME "Fedora"> <!-- The project's (and software's) basic name -->
Index: splash.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/splash.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- splash.xml 23 Jul 2005 03:31:13 -0000 1.11
+++ splash.xml 26 Jul 2005 21:07:06 -0000 1.12
@@ -339,8 +339,8 @@
The unofficial <ulink
url="http://fedorafaq.org">http://fedorafaq.org</ulink> provides
useful answers on commonly asked questions. However, these are
- completely unsupported by the &FP;. The &FP; recommends using free
- and open source software alternatives whenever possible.
+ completely unsupported by the &FP;. The &FP; encourages using free
+ and open source software..
</para>
<para>
The binary only drivers can be acquired from the vendors. You can
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