release-notes desktop-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 development-tools-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 java-package-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3 kernel-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 package-movement-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 package-notes-en.xml, 1.5, 1.6 security-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 splash-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 xorg-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4

Stuart Ellis (elliss) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed Nov 23 23:58:32 UTC 2005 

Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv11155

Modified Files:
	desktop-en.xml development-tools-en.xml java-package-en.xml 
	kernel-en.xml package-movement-en.xml package-notes-en.xml 
	security-en.xml splash-en.xml xorg-en.xml 
Log Message:
- Replaced &FCVER; entities with &LOCALVER; to provide correct version numbers in text and headers
- Removed "Update for Fedora Core test1" notices, since it's now too late...
- Commented out Package Changes section, which is marked as lasted updated in September. See bug #173777 for argument that this should be dropped.




Index: desktop-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/desktop-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- desktop-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.3
+++ desktop-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 23:58:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
   <itemizedlist>
     <title>Notes</title>
     <listitem>
-      <para>GNOME 2.12 and KDE 3.4.2 are included in &FC; &FCVER;.
+      <para>GNOME 2.12 and KDE 3.4.2 are included in &FC; &LOCALVER;.
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>


Index: development-tools-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/development-tools-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- development-tools-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.3
+++ development-tools-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 23:58:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
   <section id="sn-java-development">
     <title>Java-like Environment</title>
     <para>A Java-like free and open source environment is available
-      within the &FC; &FCVER; release.
+      within the &FC; &LOCALVER; release.
     </para>
     <para>
       It has three components: GNU Java runtime


Index: java-package-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/java-package-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- java-package-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000	1.2
+++ java-package-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 23:58:24 -0000	1.3
@@ -1,12 +1,5 @@
 <section id="sn-java-packages">
   <title>Java Package Recommendations</title>
-  <caution>
-    <title>Information Out-of-Date</title>
-    <para>
-      The content in this section needs to be updated for &DISTRO;
-      &DISTROVER;
-    </para>
-  </caution>
   <para>
     &FC; &LOCALVER; users are advised not to use the Java RPM provided
     by Sun.  It contains <computeroutput>Provides</computeroutput> that


Index: kernel-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/kernel-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- kernel-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.3
+++ kernel-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 23:58:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
     <para>
       This distribution is based on the 2.6 series of the Linux kernel.
       &FC; may include patches for improvements, bug fixes, or
-      additional features. For this reason, the &FCl kernel may not be
+      additional features. For this reason, the &FC; kernel may not be
       line-for-line equivalent to the <firstterm>vanilla
 	kernel</firstterm> from the <ulink
 	url='http://www.kernel.org/'>http://www.kernel.org/</ulink>
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
       <para>
 	The default kernels in x86_64 architecture provide the SMP
 	capability. There is no seperate SMP kernel available for this
-	architecture in &FC; &FCVER;.
+	architecture in &FC; &LOCALVER;.
       </para>
     </note>
   </section>
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
   <section id="sn-kernel-dev">
     <title>Preparing for Kernel Development</title>
     <para>
-      &FC; &FCVER; does not include the <filename>kernel-source</filename>
+      &FC; &LOCALVER; does not include the <filename>kernel-source</filename>
       package provided by older versions. Instead, configured sources
       are available as described in <xref linkend="sn-kernel-flavors"/>.
       Users that require access to &FC; original kernel sources
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@
   <section id="kernel-user-space-depencies">
     <title>User Space Dependencies on the Kernel</title>
     <para>
-      &PROD; &PRODVER; has support for clustered storage through the Red
+      &FC; &LOCALVER; has support for clustered storage through the Red
       Hat GFS file system. This requires a special kernel that works in
       conjunction with some user-space utilities, such as management
       daemons. Consequently, to remove such a kernel, perhaps after an


Index: package-movement-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/package-movement-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- package-movement-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 19:40:56 -0000	1.4
+++ package-movement-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 23:58:24 -0000	1.5
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
   <title>Packages Movement</title>
   <!-- 
   FIXME
-  Needs updating of entire contents for FC4.
-  -->
+  Needs updating of entire contents for FC5.
+
   <para>
     This command was used to generate the list of package changes.  The
     backslash <computeroutput>\</computeroutput> is used to artificially
@@ -932,6 +932,7 @@
     <para>[111033] ncpfs-2.2.4-8 -> [115462] ncpfs-2.2.4-9 </para>
     <para>[106079] prelink-0.3.4-3 -> [117615] prelink-0.3.6-1 </para>
     <para>[110767] netpbm-10.27-3 -> [116518] netpbm-10.29-1 </para>
+-->
     <section id="sn-packages-added">
       <title>Packages Added</title>
       <para>
@@ -1060,8 +1061,6 @@
     </para>
 -->
   </section>
-
-</section>
 <!--
 Local variables:
 mode: xml


Index: package-notes-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/package-notes-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- package-notes-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 06:55:57 -0000	1.5
+++ package-notes-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 23:58:24 -0000	1.6
@@ -37,13 +37,6 @@
     easier access, they are generally organized using the same groups
     used in Anaconda.
   </para>
-  <caution>
-    <title>Information Out-of-Date</title>
-    <para>
-      The content in this section needs to be updated for &DISTRO;
-      &DISTROVER;
-    </para>
-  </caution>
   <section id="sn-basic-components">
     <title>Basic Components</title>
     <para>


Index: security-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/security-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- security-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 06:55:57 -0000	1.3
+++ security-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 23:58:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -16,10 +16,8 @@
     <para>
       This section highlights various security items from &FC;.
     </para>
-    <variablelist>
-      <varlistentry>
-	<term>Buffer Overflow detection and variable reordering</term>
-	<listitem>
+      <section>
+	<title>Buffer Overflow detection and variable reordering</title>
 	  <para>For this release, all of the software in the &FC; and
 	    &FEX; software repositories is compiled using a security
 	    feature called <firstterm>fstack-protecter</firstterm>.
@@ -32,14 +30,13 @@
 	    application is started and makes it impossible to guess
 	    remotely. This is a security feature that has been
 	    backported from GCC 4.1 to the version of the GCC compiler
-	    used in &FC; &FCVER;. 
+	    used in &FC; &LOCALVER;. 
 	  </para>
 	  <para>
 	    This is in addition to using <envar>FORTIFY_SOURCE</envar>
 	    from &FC; 4 onwards.
 	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-      </varlistentry>    
+      </section>
     
     <section>
     <para>
@@ -53,21 +50,20 @@
       <filename>/etc/pki/CA/</filename>.
     </para>        
     <para>
-      Dovecot: A dovecot-openssl.cnf file is automatically installed in
-      <filename>/etc/pki/dovecot/</filename>.
+      Dovecot: A <filename>dovecot-openssl.cnf</filename> file is automatically installed in <filename>/etc/pki/dovecot/</filename>.
     </para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-security-selinux-changes">
     <title>SELinux Changes</title>
     <para>
-      MCS SELinux is in somewhere. Major highlight.  For more
-      information, read this informative article:
+      Mult-Category Security (MCS) SELinux is included in &FC; &LOCALVER;. For more information, read this informative article:
     </para>
     <para>
       <ulink
 	url="http://post-office.corp.redhat.com/archives/rhselinux-project/2005-June/msg00001.html">http://post-office.corp.redhat.com/archives/rhselinux-project/2005-June/msg00001.html</ulink>
     </para>
   </section>
+  </section>
 </section>
 <!--
 Local variables:


Index: splash-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/splash-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- splash-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 06:55:57 -0000	1.4
+++ splash-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 23:58:24 -0000	1.5
@@ -84,10 +84,10 @@
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
   <section id="sn-new-in-fc">
-    <title>What's New In &FC; &FCVER;</title>
+    <title>What's New In &FC; &LOCALVER;</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Xen Virtualisation software and yum package manager are
+        <para>Xen virtualisation software and yum package manager are
 	  now well integrated within the &FED; installer. The installer
 	  interface is more streamlined.  Remote logging and improved
 	  support for tracebacks is included.


Index: xorg-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/xorg-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- xorg-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 06:55:57 -0000	1.3
+++ xorg-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 23:58:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
         <para>The system app-defaults directory for X resources, is now
 	  <filename>%{_datadir}/X11/app-defaults</filename>, which
 	  expands to <filename>/usr/share/X11/app-defaults</filename> on
-	  &FC; &FCVER; and for future &RHEL; systems. </para>
+	  &FC; &LOCALVER; and for future &RHEL; systems. </para>
       </section>
       <section id="sn-xorg-xft-config">
         <title><filename>xft-config</filename> can't be found</title>

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