install-guide fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml, 1.9, 1.10 fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml, 1.13, 1.14 fedora-install-guide-en.xml, 1.23, 1.24 fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml, 1.18, 1.19 fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml, 1.14, 1.15

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sat Nov 26 16:59:35 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv3895

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-en.xml fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 
Log Message:
Bump 1.0.2, hopefully adding organization improvements and a bit on /home


Index: fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml	22 Nov 2005 01:11:28 -0000	1.9
+++ fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml	26 Nov 2005 16:59:27 -0000	1.10
@@ -3,25 +3,23 @@
   <title>Beginning the Installation</title>
 
   <para>
-    To begin installation of &FC;, boot the computer from the boot
-    media.  The boot media provides the necessary programs and files to
-    start the installation program.  Once you start the installation
+    To begin installation of &FC;, boot the computer from the bootable
+    media.  The bootable media provides the necessary programs and files
+    to start the installation program.  Once you start the installation
     program, you may be able to install from a completely different
     piece of media.
   </para>
 
-  <important>
-    <title>Choosing a Different Installation Source</title>
-    <para>
-      To choose a different source for installation, enter
-      <userinput>linux askmethod</userinput> at the
-      <computeroutput>boot:</computeroutput> prompt.  If you boot from
-      some types of media such as USB or the network, the installation
-      program <emphasis>always</emphasis> asks you to choose the
-      installation source.
-    </para>
-  </important>
-
+  <para>
+    If you boot from the first installation disc of the &FC;
+    distribution, you may choose a different source for installation.
+    The default source is the CDs themselves.  To change this behavior,
+    enter <userinput>linux askmethod</userinput> at the
+    <computeroutput>boot:</computeroutput> prompt.  If you boot from
+    other media, the installation program <emphasis>always</emphasis>
+    asks you to choose the installation source.
+  </para>
+  
   <para>
     The <indexterm>
       <primary>BIOS (Basic Input/Output System)</primary>


Index: fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
--- fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 00:18:04 -0000	1.13
+++ fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	26 Nov 2005 16:59:27 -0000	1.14
@@ -246,26 +246,29 @@
       <title>Partition Types</title>
 
       <para>
-      Every partition has a <indexterm>
-	<primary>partition</primary>
-	<secondary>type</secondary>
-	<seealso>file system</seealso>
-      </indexterm> <firstterm>partition type</firstterm>, to indicate the format of the <indexterm>
-	<primary>file system</primary> </indexterm> <firstterm>file system</firstterm> on that
-      partition.  The file system enables Linux to organize, search, and
-	retrieve files stored on that partition.  Use the
+	Every partition has a <indexterm>
+	  <primary>partition</primary>
+	  <secondary>type</secondary>
+	  <seealso>file system</seealso>
+	</indexterm> <firstterm>partition type</firstterm>, to indicate
+	the format of the <indexterm>
+	  <primary>file system</primary> </indexterm> <firstterm>file
+	  system</firstterm> on that partition.  The file system enables
+	Linux to organize, search, and retrieve files stored on that
+	partition.  Use the
 	<indexterm>
-	<primary><systemitem
-	    class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem></primary>
-	<see>file system</see>
-      </indexterm><indexterm>
-	<primary>file system</primary>
-	<secondary
-	  sortas="filesystem"><systemitem>ext3</systemitem></secondary>
-      </indexterm> <systemitem
-	class="filesystem"><firstterm>ext3</firstterm></systemitem> file
-	    system for data partitions, unless you have specific needs that require another
-	type of file system.
+	  <primary><systemitem
+	      class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem></primary>
+	  <see>file system</see>
+	</indexterm><indexterm>
+	  <primary>file system</primary>
+	  <secondary
+	    sortas="filesystem"><systemitem>ext3</systemitem></secondary>
+	</indexterm> <systemitem
+	  class="filesystem"><firstterm>ext3</firstterm></systemitem>
+	file system for data partitions that are not part of LVM, unless
+	you have specific needs that require another type of file
+	system.
       </para>
 
       </section> 
@@ -315,8 +318,31 @@
          </para>
       </note>
 
-   </section>
+    </section>
 
+    <section id="sn-partitioning-home">
+      <title>Creating a <filename>/home</filename> Partition</title>
+
+      <para>
+	Many users find it helpful to create a separate partition for
+	the <filename>/home</filename> directory.  With a separate
+	<filename>/home</filename> partition, you can reinstall &FC;
+	without erasing user data files.  If you expect that you or
+	other users will be creating data files, you should create a
+	<filename>/home</filename> partition.
+      </para>
+
+      <tip>
+	<title>LVM and <filename>/home</filename></title>
+	<para>
+	  If your &FC; system will host accounts for numerous users, you
+	  should create the <filename>/home</filename> partition in an
+	  LVM logical volume.  LVM provides flexibility for adding more
+	  user data storage later.
+	</para>
+      </tip>
+
+    </section>
 
   </section>
 


Index: fedora-install-guide-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.23
retrieving revision 1.24
diff -u -r1.23 -r1.24
--- fedora-install-guide-en.xml	26 Nov 2005 14:43:08 -0000	1.23
+++ fedora-install-guide-en.xml	26 Nov 2005 16:59:27 -0000	1.24
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
 
 <!ENTITY DOCNAME "fedora-install-guide">
 <!ENTITY DOCLANG "en">
-<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.01rc">
-<!ENTITY DOCDATE "2005-11-20">
+<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.0.2">
+<!ENTITY DOCDATE "2005-11-25">
 <!ENTITY BOOKID "&DOCNAME;-&DOCLANG;-&DOCVERSION; (&DOCDATE;)">
 
 <!ENTITY LEGALNOTICE SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/legalnotice-en.xml">
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 
 <book id="book" lang="en">
   <bookinfo>
-    <title>&FC; &FCLOCALVER; &IG;</title>
+    <title>&FC; &FCLOCALVER; &IG; - BETA</title>
     <!-- Remove DOCLOCALVER for release -->
     <copyright>
       <year>2005</year>
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
 	</revdescription>
       </revision>
       <revision>
-	<revnumber>1.01rc1</revnumber>
+	<revnumber>1.0.1rc1</revnumber>
 	<date>2005-11-20</date>
 	<authorinitials>PaulWFrields</authorinitials>
 	<revdescription>
@@ -125,6 +125,17 @@
 	  </para>
 	</revdescription>
       </revision>
+      <revision>
+	<revnumber>1.0.2</revnumber>
+	<date>2005-11-25</date>
+	<authorinitials>PaulWFrields</authorinitials>
+	<revdescription>
+	  <para>
+	    Additional reorganization for clarity; information on
+	    <filename>/home</filename> partition
+	  </para>
+	</revdescription>
+      </revision>
     </revhistory>
   </bookinfo>
 


Index: fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.18
retrieving revision 1.19
diff -u -r1.18 -r1.19
--- fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml	26 Nov 2005 14:45:12 -0000	1.18
+++ fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml	26 Nov 2005 16:59:27 -0000	1.19
@@ -71,59 +71,25 @@
     <title>Before You Begin</title>
     
     <para>
-      To install &FC; from discs, you need four installation CDs, or the
-      installation DVD.  There are separate disc sets for each supported
-      <firstterm>architecture</firstterm>.  Currently, &FC; supports the
-      <firstterm>i386</firstterm>, <firstterm>ppc</firstterm>, and
-      <firstterm>x86_64</firstterm> architectures.  These architectures
-      are described below:
+      Before installing &FC; you will need access to the following
+      things:
     </para>
-
-    <variablelist>
-      <varlistentry>
-	<term>i386</term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    Intel x86-compatible processors, including Intel Pentium and
-	    Pentium-MMX, Pentium Pro, Pentium-II, Pentium-III, Celeron,
-	    Pentium 4, and Xeon; VIA C3/C3-m and Eden/Eden-N; and AMD
-	    Athlon, AthlonXP, Duron, AthlonMP, and Sempron
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-      <varlistentry>
-	<term>ppc</term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    PowerPC processors, such as those found in Apple Power
-	    Macintosh, G3, G4, and G5, and IBM pSeries systems
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-      <varlistentry>
-	<term>x86_64</term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    64-bit AMD processors such as Athlon64, Turion64, Opteron;
-	    and Intel 64-bit processors such as EM64T
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-    </variablelist>
-
-    <para>
-      You should also have the following documents:
-    </para>
- 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  a current copy of the Release Notes
+	  Boot or installation media (refer to <xref
+	  linkend="sn-preparing-media"/> for more information)
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>
+	  Information about your network configuration
 	</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  a copy of this &IG;
+	  A copy of this &IG; and the Release Notes for this version of
+	  &FC;
 	</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -138,8 +104,7 @@
     <para>
       The Release Notes are available on the first disc in HTML and
       plain text format.  The latest versions of this &IG; and the
-      Release Notes can always be found at <ulink
-	url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/">&FDPDOCS-URL;</ulink>.
+      Release Notes can always be found at &FDPDOCS-URL;.
     </para>
 
     <section id="sn-installing-network-configurations">
@@ -226,7 +191,8 @@
 	<firstterm>PXE</firstterm> (Pre-boot eXecution Environment) to
 	boot your computer.  Boot your computer using either an
 	installation DVD, the first installation CD, a boot CD, or a
-	prepared USB storage device.
+	prepared USB storage device.  Refer to <xref
+	linkend="sn-preparing-media"/> for more information.
       </para>
       
       <para>
@@ -235,11 +201,6 @@
 	device.  &FC; includes utilities that allow it to function as a
 	  PXE server for other computers.
       </para>
-
-      <para>
-	Booting your computer is explained in the next section, <xref
-	  linkend="ch-beginninginstallation"/>.
-      </para>
       
     </section>
     
@@ -338,35 +299,83 @@
     </note>
 
     <para>
+      To install &FC; from discs, you need five installation CDs, or the
+      installation DVD.  There are separate disc sets for each supported
+      <firstterm>architecture</firstterm>.  Currently, &FC; supports the
+      <firstterm>i386</firstterm>, <firstterm>ppc</firstterm>, and
+      <firstterm>x86_64</firstterm> architectures.  These architectures
+      are described below:
+    </para>
+
+    <variablelist>
+      <varlistentry>
+	<term>i386</term>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    Intel x86-compatible processors, including Intel Pentium and
+	    Pentium-MMX, Pentium Pro, Pentium-II, Pentium-III, Celeron,
+	    Pentium 4, and Xeon; VIA C3/C3-m and Eden/Eden-N; and AMD
+	    Athlon, AthlonXP, Duron, AthlonMP, and Sempron
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+      <varlistentry>
+	<term>ppc</term>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    PowerPC processors, such as those found in Apple Power
+	    Macintosh, G3, G4, and G5, and IBM pSeries systems
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+      <varlistentry>
+	<term>x86_64</term>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    64-bit AMD processors such as Athlon64, Turion64, Opteron;
+	    and Intel 64-bit processors such as EM64T
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
+
+    <important>
+      <title>Architecture-Specific Distributions</title>
+      <para>
+	To install &FC; you need the boot or installation media that is
+	particular to your architecture.
+      </para>
+    </important>
+
+    <para>
       The &FC; distribution includes <firstterm>image files</firstterm>
       for boot-only CD or DVD media and USB media. These files can be
       converted into bootable media using standard Linux utilities or
       third-party programs on other operating systems.
     </para>
 
-    <note>
-      <title>CD or DVD Installation Media</title>
-      <para>
-	You may also use the first CD or DVD disc from the complete &FC;
-	distribution as boot media.  For instructions to download and
-	prepare this media, refer to <ulink
-	  url="http://fedora.redhat.com/download/"/>.  If you already
-	have the full set of &FC;, skip to <xref
-	linkend="sn-booting-from-disc"/>.
-      </para>
-    </note>
+    <para>
+      You may also use the first CD or DVD installation disc from the
+      complete &FC; distribution as boot media.  For instructions to
+      download and prepare this CD or DVD installation media, refer to
+      <ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/download/"/>.  If you already
+      have the full set of &FC; installation media, skip to <xref
+      linkend="sn-booting-from-disc"/>.
+    </para>
 
     <section id="sn-preparing-cd-or-dvd-media">
-      <title>Preparing CD or DVD Boot Disc</title>
+      <title>Preparing CD or DVD Media</title>
 
       <para>
 	The <filename>images/boot.iso</filename> file on the first &FC;
 	installation disc is a boot image designed for CD and DVD media.
-	This file also appears on FTP and Web sites providing &FC;.
+	This file also appears on FTP and Web sites providing &FC;.  You
+	can also find this file on mirror sites in the &FC; distribution
+	directory for your particular architecture.
       </para>
 
       <para>
-	To convert the ISO file into a physical CD, use the option in
+	To convert an ISO file into a physical CD, use the option in
 	your CD-writing program that burns a CD image file to a CD. If
 	you copy the file itself to a CD instead, the disc will not boot
 	or work correctly.  Refer to your CD writing program
@@ -438,7 +447,7 @@
 	  </para>
 
 <screen>
-<userinput>dd if=diskboot.img of=/dev/sda1</userinput>
+<userinput>dd if=diskboot.img of=/dev/sda</userinput>
 </screen>
 
 	</step>


Index: fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -r1.14 -r1.15
--- fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 00:18:55 -0000	1.14
+++ fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml	26 Nov 2005 16:59:27 -0000	1.15
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
   <orderedlist>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-	You booted with PXE, or USB media.
+	You booted with PXE, USB media, or boot-only CD or DVD media.
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
@@ -46,9 +46,10 @@
   <note>
     <title>CD/DVD Activity</title>
     <para>
-      If a &FED; disc is in your computer's CD or DVD drive, the
-      installation program loads its next stage from that disc.  The
-      installation program downloads package data from the source you
+      If the first &FC; distribution installation disc is in your
+      computer's CD or DVD drive, the installation program loads its
+      next stage from that disc.  The installation program still
+      downloads <emphasis>package data</emphasis> from the source you
       choose.
     </para>
   </note>




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