install-guide/en_US fedora-install-guide-networkconfig.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml, 1.2, 1.3 fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml, 1.2, 1.3

[Stuart Ellis (elliss)]

Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv8059/en_US

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-networkconfig.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml 
Log Message:
- Amended text to address bug 189625: current versions of the package management tools require network connectivity.




Index: fedora-install-guide-networkconfig.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-networkconfig.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-networkconfig.xml	17 Mar 2006 19:40:20 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-networkconfig.xml	30 Apr 2006 14:03:27 -0000	1.2
@@ -94,9 +94,7 @@
 	list <indexterm>
 	  <primary>modem</primary>
 	</indexterm> modems.  Configure these devices after installation
-	with either the <application>Internet Configuration
-	  Wizard</application> or <application>Network
-	  Cnfiguration</application> utility.  The settings for your
+	with the <application>Network</application> utility. The settings for your
 	modem are specific to your particular Internet Service Provider
 	(ISP).
       </para>


Index: fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml	29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml	30 Apr 2006 14:03:27 -0000	1.3
@@ -99,6 +99,17 @@
       Refer to <ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/yum/"/> for
       more information on <command>yum</command>.
     </para>
+
+    <note>
+      <title>Network Connection Required</title>
+
+      <para>
+        Ensure that your system has an active network connection before
+        you run the <application>Software Updater</application>, or the
+        <command>yum</command> utility. The update process downloads
+        information and packages from a network of servers.
+      </para>
+    </note>
     <tip>
       <title>Automating Updates</title>
       <para>


Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml	29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml	30 Apr 2006 14:03:27 -0000	1.3
@@ -89,7 +89,8 @@
     <title>Core Network Services</title>
 
     <para>
-      All Fedora Core installations include the following network services:
+      All Fedora Core installations include the following network
+      services:
     </para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -127,7 +128,8 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          network file transfer through HTTP (HyperText Transfer Protocol)
+          network file transfer through HTTP (HyperText Transfer
+          Protocol)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -228,10 +230,12 @@
       <para>
         The packages that you select are not permanent. After you boot
         your system, use the <application>pirut</application> tool to
-        make different software selections for your system. To run this
-        tool, from the main menu, select <menuchoice>
+        either install new software, or remove installed packages. To
+        run this tool, from the main menu, select <menuchoice>
         <guimenu>Applications</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Add/Remove
-        Software</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
+        Software</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. The &FED; software
+        management system downloads the latest packages from network
+        servers, rather than using those on the installation discs.
       </para>
     </tip>
   </section>