install-guide/en_US entities.xml, 1.4, 1.5 fedora-install-guide-intro.xml, 1.2, 1.3

Stuart Ellis (elliss) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun Apr 30 18:28:31 UTC 2006


Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv18301/en_US

Modified Files:
	entities.xml fedora-install-guide-intro.xml 
Log Message:
- Fixed bug 186114.




Index: entities.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/entities.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- entities.xml	4 Apr 2006 00:26:35 -0000	1.4
+++ entities.xml	30 Apr 2006 18:28:28 -0000	1.5
@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCVERSION">
       <comment>Document version</comment>
-      <text>1.28</text>
+      <text>1.30</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCDATE">
       <comment>Document date</comment>
-      <text>2006-04-04</text>
+      <text>2006-30-04</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCID">
       <comment>Document ID string</comment>


Index: fedora-install-guide-intro.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-intro.xml	6 Apr 2006 03:42:16 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-intro.xml	30 Apr 2006 18:28:28 -0000	1.3
@@ -257,10 +257,11 @@
 
       <para>
         The &FP; maintains a list of HTTP and FTP public mirrors, sorted
-        by region, at <ulink
-        url="http://fedora.redhat.com/download/mirrors.html"/>.  
-        To determine the complete directory path for the
-        installation files, add
+        by region, at
+        <ulink
+        url="http://fedora.redhat.com/download/mirrors.html"/>.
+        To determine the complete directory path for the installation
+        files, add
         <filename>/&FCLOCALVER;/<replaceable>architecture</replaceable>/os/</filename>
         to the path shown on the webpage.
       </para>
@@ -453,81 +454,78 @@
         directory for your particular architecture.
       </para>
 
-	<para>
-	  The &FC; distribution is also downloadable as a set of
-	  CD-sized ISO image files or a single DVD-sized ISO image
-	  file.  You can record these files to CD or DVD using a CD or
-	  DVD burning program on your current operating system:
-	</para>
-
-	<variablelist>
-	  <varlistentry>
-	    <term>Windows operating systems</term>
-	    <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		Burn an ISO image to disc using your installed CD or DVD
-		burning software.  Most software has an option labeled
-		<guilabel>Burn image file to disc</guilabel> or
-		<guilabel>Make disc from ISO image</guilabel>.  If your
-		software offers a choice of image formats, choose "ISO
-		image" as the file type.  If several ISO formats are
-		offered, choose the closest match to "Mode 1, 2048-byte
-		blocks."
-	      </para>
-	    </listitem>
-	  </varlistentry>
-	  <varlistentry>
-	    <term>Apple MacOS X</term>
-	    <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		Open the <guilabel>Disk Copy</guilabel> application,
-		found in the
-		<filename>/Applications/Utilities</filename> folder.
-		From the menu, select <menuchoice>
-		  <guimenu>Image</guimenu>
-		  <guimenuitem>Burn Image...</guimenuitem>
-	    </menuchoice>.  Select the CD image to burn, check that the
-		burn options are correct, and select the
-		<guilabel>Burn</guilabel> button.
-	      </para>
-	    </listitem>
-	  </varlistentry>
-	  <varlistentry>
-	    <term>Linux operating systems</term>
-	    <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		If you are using a recent version of the GNOME desktop
-		environment, right-click the ISO image file and choose
-		<guilabel>Write to disc</guilabel>.  If you are using a
-		recent version of the KDE desktop environment, use
-		<application>K3B</application> and select <menuchoice>
-		  <guimenu>Tools</guimenu>
-		  <guimenuitem>Burn CD Image</guimenuitem>
-		</menuchoice>, or <menuchoice>
-		  <guimenu>Tools</guimenu>
-		  <guimenuitem>Burn DVD ISO Image</guimenuitem>
-		</menuchoice> if appropriate.  The following command
-		line works for many other environments:
-	      </para>
+      <para>
+        The &FC; distribution is also downloadable as a set of CD-sized
+        ISO image files or a single DVD-sized ISO image file. You can
+        record these files to CD or DVD using a CD or DVD burning
+        program on your current operating system:
+      </para>
 
+      <variablelist>
+        <varlistentry>
+          <term>Windows operating systems</term>
+          <listitem>
+            <para>
+              Burn an ISO image to disc using your installed CD or DVD
+              burning software. Most software has an option labeled
+              <guilabel>Burn image file to disc</guilabel> or
+              <guilabel>Make disc from ISO image</guilabel>. If your
+              software offers a choice of image formats, choose "ISO
+              image" as the file type. If several ISO formats are
+              offered, choose the closest match to "Mode 1, 2048-byte
+              blocks."
+            </para>
+          </listitem>
+        </varlistentry>
+
+        <varlistentry>
+          <term>Apple MacOS X</term>
+          <listitem>
+            <para>
+              Open the <guilabel>Disk Copy</guilabel> application, found
+              in the <filename>/Applications/Utilities</filename>
+              folder. From the menu, select <menuchoice>
+              <guimenu>Image</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Burn
+              Image...</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select the CD image
+              to burn, check that the burn options are correct, and
+              select the <guilabel>Burn</guilabel> button.
+            </para>
+          </listitem>
+        </varlistentry>
+
+        <varlistentry>
+          <term>Linux operating systems</term>
+          <listitem>
+            <para>
+              If you are using a recent version of the GNOME desktop
+              environment, right-click the ISO image file and choose
+              <guilabel>Write to disc</guilabel>. If you are using a
+              recent version of the KDE desktop environment, use
+              <application>K3B</application> and select <menuchoice>
+              <guimenu>Tools</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Burn CD
+              Image</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>, or <menuchoice>
+              <guimenu>Tools</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Burn DVD ISO
+              Image</guimenuitem> </menuchoice> if appropriate. The
+              following command line works for many other environments:
+            </para>
 <screen>
 <userinput>cdrecord --device=<replaceable>cdwriter-device</replaceable> -tao -eject <replaceable>image-file.iso</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
+          </listitem>
+        </varlistentry>
+      </variablelist>
 
-	    </listitem>
-	  </varlistentry>
-	</variablelist>
-	<note>
-	  <title>OS-Specific Instructions</title>
-	  <para>
-	    Unfortunately this guide cannot offer specific instructions
-	    for every possible combination of hardware and software.
-	    Consult your operating system's documentation and online
-	    support services, and <xref linkend="sn-web-help"/> for
-	    additional help if needed.
-	  </para>
-	</note>
+      <note>
+        <title>System-Specific Instructions</title>
 
+        <para>
+          Unfortunately this guide cannot offer specific instructions
+          for every possible combination of hardware and software.
+          Consult your operating system's documentation and online
+          support services, and <xref linkend="sn-web-help"/> for
+          additional help if needed.
+        </para>
+      </note>
     </section>
 
     <section id="sn-preparing-usb-media">
@@ -555,9 +553,64 @@
       <para>
         Several software utilities are available for Windows and Linux
         that can write image files to a device. Linux includes the
-        <command>dd</command> command for this purpose. To write an
-        image file to boot media with <command>dd</command> on a current
-        version of &FC;:
+        <command>dd</command> command for this purpose.
+      </para>
+
+      <para>
+        The <command>dd</command> utility requires the name of the
+        device file that corresponds to the physical media. To learn the
+        device file, carry out the following steps:
+      </para>
+      <procedure>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            Open a terminal window. On a &FED; system, choose
+            <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
+            <guisubmenu>Accessories</guisubmenu>
+            <guimenuitem>Terminal</guimenuitem> </menuchoice> to start a
+            terminal.
+          </para>
+        </step>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            Type this command, to show the currently attached drives:
+          </para>
+<screen>
+<userinput>ls /proc/mounts</userinput>
+</screen>
+        </step>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            Attach or insert the media.
+          </para>
+        </step>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            Enter <userinput>ls /proc/mounts</userinput> again. The
+            media appears as a new entry at the bottom of the list. Note
+            the device file for the media, which appears in the first
+            column for the entry.
+          </para>
+        </step>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            Unmount the media. On a &FED; system, right-click the icon
+            that corresponds to the media, and select
+            <guimenuitem>Unmount Volume</guimenuitem>. Alternatively,
+            enter this command in a terminal window:
+          </para>
+<screen>
+<userinput>umount <replaceable>/dev/sda</replaceable></userinput>
+</screen>
+          <para>
+            Replace <filename>/dev/sda</filename> with the name of the
+            correct device file for the media.
+          </para>
+        </step>
+      </procedure>
+      <para>
+        To write an image file to boot media with <command>dd</command>
+        on a current version of &FC;:
       </para>
       <procedure>
         <step>
@@ -586,8 +639,12 @@
             In the terminal window, type the following command:
           </para>
 <screen>
-<userinput>dd if=diskboot.img of=/dev/sda</userinput>
+<userinput>dd if=diskboot.img of=<replaceable>/dev/sda</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
+          <para>
+            Replace <filename>/dev/sda</filename> with the name of the
+            correct device file for the media.
+          </para>
         </step>
       </procedure>
     </section>




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