translation-quick-start-guide/en_US doc-entities.xml, 1.4, 1.5 rpm-info.xml, 1.2, 1.3 translation-quick-start.xml, 1.8, 1.9

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv32659/en_US

Modified Files:
	doc-entities.xml rpm-info.xml translation-quick-start.xml 
Log Message:
Update to 0.3.4 version, with more info on the Docs Project signup process and GPG.


Index: doc-entities.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/doc-entities.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- doc-entities.xml	6 Aug 2006 18:05:32 -0000	1.4
+++ doc-entities.xml	11 Aug 2006 02:32:55 -0000	1.5
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCVERSION">
       <comment>Document version</comment>
-      <text>0.3.3</text>
+      <text>0.3.4</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCDATE">
       <comment>Revision date</comment>
-      <text>2006-08-06</text>
+      <text>2006-08-10</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCID">
       <comment>Revision ID</comment>


Index: rpm-info.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/rpm-info.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- rpm-info.xml	8 Aug 2006 12:12:19 -0000	1.2
+++ rpm-info.xml	11 Aug 2006 02:32:55 -0000	1.3
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8" standalone="no"?>
 
-<!DOCTYPE rpm-info SYSTEM "../../docs-common/packaging/rpm-info.dtd">
+<!DOCTYPE rpm-info SYSTEM "${fdpdir}/docs-common/packaging/rpm-info.dtd">
 
 <rpm-info>
   <colophon>
@@ -47,6 +47,10 @@
   <title>Translation Quick Start Guide</title>
   <desc>Quick start guide to providing translations on the Fedora Project.</desc>
   <changelog order="newest-first">
+    <revision date="2006-08-10" number="0.3.4" role="doc">
+      <author worker="ManuelOspina"/>
+      <details>Additional information about joining the Docs Project and GPG.</details>
+    </revision>
     <revision date="2006-08-06" number="0.3.3" role="doc">
       <author worker="PaulWFrields"/>
       <details>Remove step for translating rpm-info since this is now part of document


Index: translation-quick-start.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/translation-quick-start.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- translation-quick-start.xml	9 Aug 2006 23:08:01 -0000	1.8
+++ translation-quick-start.xml	11 Aug 2006 02:32:55 -0000	1.9
@@ -62,33 +62,12 @@
 	    </para>
 	  </caution>
 	</step>
-
-<!-- Are you sure this next step is necessary?  My understanding is that -->
-<!-- this step would only be useful for authorizing you to SSH in from -->
-<!-- another host with your private key.
-
-      <step>
-	<para>
-	  Copy the key to the appropiate file:
-	</para>
-
-<screen>
-<command>cat ~/.ssh/id_dsa.pub >> ~/.ssh/authorized_keys</command>
-</screen>
-
-      </step>
-
--->
 	<step>
 	  <para>
 	    Change permissions to your key and <filename>.ssh</filename>
 	    directory:
 	  </para>
 
-<!-- Why is this permission 755?  The 700 mode is usually recommended -->
-<!-- for ~/.ssh/ for extra protection, since it does house an SSH -->
-<!-- private key. -->
-
 <screen>
 <command>chmod 700 ~/.ssh</command><!-- SEE ABOVE...
 <command>chmod 644 ~/.ssh/authorized_keys</command> -->
@@ -133,36 +112,37 @@
       <title>Accounts for Documentation</title>
       <para>
 	If you plan to translate &FED; documentation, you must have a
-	&FED; CVS account and membership on the &FDP; mailing list.    To join
-	the &FDP; mailing list, refer to <ulink
-	  url="http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list/"/>.
-	  You need to create a GPG key as the &FDP; encourage all participants to
-	  sign e-mails.  To create a key, use the following command:
-	</para>
-	<screen>
-	  <command>gpg --gen-key</command>
-	</screen>
-	<para>
-	A series of prompts guide you through the process. Press Enter to
-	select the default value.
-	</para>
-	<note>
-	<title>.gnupg directory</title>
-	<para>
-	You may need to create the ~/.gnupg directory manually if you have not
-	create a gpg key before. gpg fails if the directory is not found.
-	</para>
-	</note>
-	<para>
-	You need to export your public key, so other people can verified your
-	signature. Use this command to export your key to a public server:
-	</para>
-	<screen>
-	<command>gpg --keyserver pgp.mit.edu --send-keys GPGKEYID</command>
-	</screen>
-	<para>
-      You also need to sign up for a &FED; CVS account, visit <ulink
-	  url="https://admin.fedora.redhat.com/accounts/"/>.</para>
+	&FED; CVS account and membership on the &FDP; mailing list.  To
+	join the &FDP; mailing list, refer to <ulink
+	  url="http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list/"/>. 
+	You should also create a GPG key, since the &FDP; encourages all
+	participants to sign e-mails.  To create a key, use the
+	following command:
+      </para>
+
+<screen>
+<command>gpg --gen-key</command>
+</screen>
+
+      <para>
+	A series of prompts guides you through the process. Press
+	<keycap>Enter</keycap> to select the default values.
+      </para>
+      <para>
+	You must export your public key so other people can verify your
+	signature. Use this command to export your key to a public
+	server:
+      </para>
+
+<screen>
+<command>gpg --keyserver pgp.mit.edu --send-keys GPGKEYID</command>
+</screen>
+
+      <para>
+	You also need to sign up for a &FED; CVS account.  Visit <ulink
+	  url="https://admin.fedoraproject.com/accounts/"/> for
+	  details and instructions.
+      </para>
 
       <para>
 	You should post a self-introduction to the &FDP; mailing