install-guide/devel/en_US fedora-install-guide-intro.xml,1.2,1.3

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv3141

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-intro.xml 
Log Message:
Me talk pretty one day.



Index: fedora-install-guide-intro.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/fedora-install-guide-intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-intro.xml	20 Aug 2006 21:12:59 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-intro.xml	20 Aug 2006 21:18:29 -0000	1.3
@@ -79,11 +79,11 @@
       The &FP; provides distributions of &FC; for several different
       types of computer systems.  Each distribution of &FC; is built for
       computers based on a specific <firstterm>architecture</firstterm>.
-      Loosely speaking, the architecture is a way of describing the
-      processor on which the computer is built.  Most computers come
-      with identifying marks and literature describing the processor
-      inside the computer.  Refer to your computer's marks or literature
-      and find its architecture in the list below:
+      The architecture describes the processor on which the computer is
+      built.  Most computers come with identifying marks and literature
+      describing the processor inside the computer.  Refer to your
+      computer's marks or literature and find its architecture in the
+      list below:
     </para>
 
     <variablelist>