release-notes/devel/en_US Feedback.xml,1.6,1.7

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv7391

Modified Files:
	Feedback.xml 
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Index: Feedback.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Feedback.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- Feedback.xml	13 Aug 2006 16:59:58 -0000	1.6
+++ Feedback.xml	29 Aug 2006 01:01:57 -0000	1.7
@@ -3,65 +3,68 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-Feedback">
-  <title>Providing Feedback for Release Notes</title>
+  <title>Feedback</title>
 
   <para>
+    Thank you for taking the time to provide your comments, suggestions,
+    and bug reports to the &FED; community.  By doing so, you help
+    improve the state of &FED;, Linux, and free software worldwide.
+  </para>
+
+  <section>
+    <title>Providing Feedback on &FED; Software</title>
+
+    <para>
+      To provide feedback on &FED; software or other system elements,
+      please refer to <ulink
+	url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/BugsAndFeatureRequests"/>. A
+      list of commonly reported bugs and known issues for this release
+      is available from <ulink
+	url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/FC6Common"/>.
+    </para>
+  </section>
+
+  <section>
+    <title>Providing Feedback on Release Notes</title>
+
     <important>
       <title>Feedback for Release Notes Only</title>
 
       <para>
 	This section concerns feedback on the release notes themselves.
-	To provide feedback on Fedora software or other system elements,
-	please refer to <ulink
-	  url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/BugsAndFeatureRequests"/>.
-	A list of commonly reported bugs and known issues for this
-	release is available from <ulink
-	  url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/FC6Common"/>.
       </para>
     </important>
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-    Thanks for your interest in giving feedback for these release notes.
-    If you feel these release notes could be improved in any way, you
-    can provide your feedback directly to the beat writers. Here are
-    several ways to do so, in order of preference:
-  </para>
-
-  <itemizedlist>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>
-	Edit content directly at <ulink
-	  url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats'/>
-      </para>
-    </listitem>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>
-	Fill out a bug request using this template: <ulink
-	  url='http://tinyurl.com/nej3u'/>.  <emphasis
-	  role='strong'>This link is ONLY for feedback on the release
-	  notes themselves.</emphasis> (Refer to the admonition above
-	for details.)
-      </para>
-    </listitem>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>
-	Email <ulink
-	  url='mailto:relnotes at fedoraproject.org'>relnotes at fedoraproject.org</ulink>.
-      </para>
-    </listitem>
-  </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>
-    A release note beat is an area of the release notes that one or more
-    content contributors oversee. For more information about beats,
-    refer to <ulink
-      url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'/>.
-  </para>
+    <para>
+      If you feel these release notes could be improved in any way, you
+      can provide your feedback directly to the beat writers. Here are
+      several ways to do so, in order of preference:
+    </para>
+
+    <itemizedlist>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>
+	  If you have a &FED; account, Edit content directly at <ulink
+	    url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats'/>
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>
+	  Fill out a bug request using this template: <ulink
+	    url='http://tinyurl.com/nej3u'/>.  <emphasis
+	    role='strong'>This link is ONLY for feedback on the release
+	    notes themselves.</emphasis>  Refer to the admonition above
+	  for details.
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>
+	  Email <ulink
+	    url='mailto:relnotes at fedoraproject.org'>relnotes at fedoraproject.org</ulink>.
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>
-    Thank you for your feedback!
-  </para>
 </section>
 
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