release-notes/en OverView.xml,1.5,1.6

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13132

Modified Files:
	OverView.xml 
Log Message:
Capturing some worthwhile language changes at the last minute from Dave Jones.


Index: OverView.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/OverView.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- OverView.xml	28 Feb 2006 21:45:48 -0000	1.5
+++ OverView.xml	1 Mar 2006 00:33:21 -0000	1.6
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
             <para> The new <emphasis role='strong'>GNOME User Share</emphasis> facility provides simple and efficient file sharing. </para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
-            <para> Software suspend (hibernate) capability is now provided for a wide variety of hardware. </para>
+            <para>Suspend to RAM support has also been improved due to infrastructure work done by the hibernate support.</para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
             <para> The previous graphical software management utilities have been replaced with the first versions of a new generation of tools. This release includes <emphasis role='strong'>Pup</emphasis>, a simple interface for system updates, and <emphasis role='strong'>Pirut</emphasis>, a new package manager that replaces <code>system-config-packages</code>. These build on the <code>yum</code> utility, to provide consistent software installation and update facilities throughout the system. </para>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
             <para> A large number of <emphasis role='strong'>GTK</emphasis> and <emphasis role='strong'>GNOME</emphasis> programs take advantage of the <emphasis role='strong'>Cairo</emphasis> 2D graphics library (<ulink url='http://cairographics.org/'>http://cairographics.org/</ulink>), included in this release, to provide streamlined attractive graphical interfaces. </para>
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-            <para> There are new drivers that provide support for the widely-used Broadcom 43xx wireless chipsets (<ulink url='http://bcm43xx.berlios.de/'>http://bcm43xx.berlios.de/</ulink>). </para>
+            <para> There are new experimental drivers that provide support for the widely-used Broadcom 43xx wireless chipsets (<ulink url='http://bcm43xx.berlios.de/'>http://bcm43xx.berlios.de/</ulink>). </para>
           </listitem>
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             <para> This release includes <code>libnotify</code>, a library that features simple and attractive notifications for the desktop.  </para>