install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide-intro.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide.xml, 1.5, 1.6

Yuan Yijun (bbbush) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed Mar 1 12:53:04 UTC 2006


Author: bbbush

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv11555

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-intro.xml fedora-install-guide.xml 
Log Message:
edit some place in order to build


Index: fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation.xml	1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation.xml	1 Mar 2006 12:52:56 -0000	1.6
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 ]>
 
 <!-- $Id: -->
+<book>
 <chapter id="ch-beginninginstallation">
   <title>Beginning the Installation</title>
 
@@ -158,6 +159,7 @@
       first stage of the installation program starts.
     </para>
 
+	</section>
     <section id="sn-media-testing">
       <title>Testing CD and DVD Media</title>
 
@@ -268,10 +270,6 @@
     installing from bad discs on that chance. - PWF.
 
 -->
-
-    </section>
-
-
     <para>
       After you test your discs and select
       <guibutton>Continue</guibutton>, or if you choose to skip testing,
@@ -369,8 +367,8 @@
     </note>
 
   </section>
-
 </chapter>
+</book>
 
 <!--
 Local variables:


Index: fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml	1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml	1 Mar 2006 12:52:56 -0000	1.6
@@ -277,8 +277,8 @@
 	    sortas="filesystem"><systemitem>ext3</systemitem>
           </secondary>
         </indexterm>
-        <systemitem
-	  class="filesystem"><firstterm>ext3</firstterm></systemitem>
+        <firstterm><systemitem
+	  class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem></firstterm>
         file system for data partitions that are not part of LVM, unless
         you have specific needs that require another type of file
         system.
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@
         storage is then divided into one or more
         <indexterm>
           <primary>LVM</primary>
-          <primary>logical volume</primary>
+          <secondary>logical volume</secondary>
         </indexterm>
         <firstterm>logical volumes</firstterm>. The logical volumes
         function much like standard data partitions. They have a file
@@ -583,8 +583,8 @@
 		    class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem>
                 </secondary>
               </indexterm>
-              <systemitem
-		class="filesystem"><firstterm>vfat</firstterm></systemitem>
+              <firstterm><systemitem
+		class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem></firstterm>
               (<systemitem class="filesystem">FAT16</systemitem> or
               <systemitem class="filesystem">FAT32</systemitem>)
               partitions with a mount point.


Index: fedora-install-guide-intro.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-intro.xml	1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-intro.xml	1 Mar 2006 12:52:56 -0000	1.6
@@ -43,7 +43,6 @@
     they exist, do not reference them. - PWF.] -->
   </para>
 
-  &BUG-REPORTING;
 
   <section id="sn-background">
     <title>Background</title>


Index: fedora-install-guide.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide.xml	1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide.xml	1 Mar 2006 12:52:56 -0000	1.6
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
 
-<!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN"
+<!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN"
  "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd" [
 
  <!ENTITY % FEDORA-ENTITIES SYSTEM "../locale-entities.xml">
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
   xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   <xi:include href="./fedora-install-guide-intro.xml" xpointer="element(ch-intro)"
   xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-  <xi:include href="./fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation.xml" xpointer="element(ch-begininginstallation)"
+  <xi:include href="./fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation.xml" xpointer="element(ch-beginninginstallation)"
   xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   <xi:include href="./fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml" xpointer="element(ch-other-install-methods)"
   xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>




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