install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml, 1.6, 1.7 fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide-locale.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml, 1.5, 1.6
Stuart Ellis (elliss)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Thu Mar 2 01:25:05 UTC 2006
Author: elliss
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv11525/en
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml
fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml
fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml
fedora-install-guide-locale.xml
fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml
fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml
Log Message:
- Fixed admonition title in Locale section.
- Added note that the second stage installer may take a while to download from network servers (this file is now 67 Mb !).
- Added mDNS to the list of mandatory services installed with Core.
- Added admonition that opening the SSH port provides immediate remote access, since the service is automatically live.
- Added admonition to explain "isa" boot option.
Index: fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml 1 Mar 2006 01:43:13 -0000 1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml 2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000 1.6
@@ -1048,6 +1048,14 @@
</tbody>
</tgroup>
</table>
+
+<note>
+<title>Additional Screen</title>
+<para>
+ The <option>isa</option> option causes the system to display an additional text screen at the beginning of the installation process. Use this screen to configure the ISA devices on your computer.
+</para>
+</note>
+
</section>
</section>
<section id="sn-boot-modes">
@@ -1095,8 +1103,7 @@
</indexterm>
rescue disc or the first installation disc, without installing
&FED; on the computer. This enables you to use the utilities and
- functions of a running Linux system to modify or repair an
- installed system.
+ functions of a running Linux system to modify or repair systems that are already installed on your computer.
</para>
<para>
Index: fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml 1 Mar 2006 12:52:56 -0000 1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml 2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000 1.7
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
<firstterm>RAID</firstterm> facilities enable a group, or array,
of drives to act as a single device. Configure any RAID functions
provided by your mainboard, or attached controller cards, before
- you install &FC;. Active RAID arrays appear as one drive.
+ you install &FC;. Each active RAID array appears as one drive.
</para>
</important>
<!-- SE: Note that this chapter uses the term "Linux software RAID" to differentiate RAID provided by the kernel from the functions of ATA RAID controllers, which are often also called "software RAID". Unfortunately. -->
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
customize the partition layout. If you choose to either
<guilabel>Create custom layout</guilabel>, or <guilabel>Review and
modify partitioning layout</guilabel>, proceed to
- <xref linkend="sn-partitioning-general"/> .
+ <xref linkend="sn-partitioning-general"/>.
</para>
</note>
<section id="sn-partitioning-general">
Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml 1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000 1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml 2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000 1.6
@@ -129,6 +129,13 @@
check box next to the service name.
</para>
+ <important>
+ <title>SSH Provides Immediate Remote Access</title>
+ <para>
+ By default, &FED; installs and runs the SSH service. If you enable SSH access on this screen the user and <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> accounts may be used to access the system remotely.
+ </para>
+ </important>
+
<para>
To enable access to other services, enter the required ports in
the <guilabel>Other ports:</guilabel> field. For each port, you
Index: fedora-install-guide-locale.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-locale.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-locale.xml 1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000 1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-locale.xml 2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000 1.6
@@ -20,6 +20,7 @@
</para>
<important>
+ <title>Network Installations</title>
<para>
Network installations with HTTP and FTP always use text screens on
systems with less than 128Mb of memory.
Index: fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml 1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000 1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml 2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000 1.6
@@ -156,6 +156,15 @@
</textobject>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
+
+ <note>
+ <title>Large Download</title>
+
+ <para>
+ Network installations download the main installation program from the server that you specify. The graphical installation program is over 60 Mb in size. Computers with a slow network connection may take several minutes to download this file.
+ </para>
+ </note>
+
</section>
</section>
<section id="sn-installing-from-harddrive">
Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml 1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000 1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml 2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000 1.6
@@ -117,6 +117,11 @@
remote access through SSH (Secure SHell)
</para>
</listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ resource advertising through mDNS (multicast DNS)
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para>
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