install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml, 1.9, 1.10 fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml, 1.11, 1.12

[Stuart Ellis (elliss)]

Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv17471/en

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml 
Log Message:
- A couple more small amendments.




Index: fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml	5 Mar 2006 03:02:05 -0000	1.9
+++ fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml	5 Mar 2006 21:15:31 -0000	1.10
@@ -398,14 +398,17 @@
         <title>Firewall Reconfiguration Required</title>
 
         <para>
-          By default, the <application>vncviewer</application> utility
-          listens on TCP port 5500. To update the &FED; firewall
-          configuration to permit connections to this port from other
-          systems, choose <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
+          By default, <application>vncviewer</application> uses TCP port
+          5500 when in listening mode. To permit connections to this
+          port from other systems, choose <menuchoice>
+          <guimenu>System</guimenu>
           <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Security
-          Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>, enter
-          <userinput>5500:tcp</userinput> in the <guilabel>Other
-          ports:</guilabel> field, and select <guilabel>OK</guilabel>.
+          Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select
+          <guilabel>Other ports</guilabel>, and
+          <guibutton>Add</guibutton>. Enter <userinput>5500</userinput>
+          in the <guilabel>Port(s)</guilabel> field, and specify
+          <userinput>tcp</userinput> as the
+          <guilabel>Protocol</guilabel>.
         </para>
       </note>
 
@@ -552,13 +555,15 @@
 
         <para>
           By default, the syslog service listens on UDP port 514. To
-          update the &FED; firewall configuration to permit connections
-          to this port from other systems, choose <menuchoice>
-          <guimenu>System</guimenu>
+          permit connections to this port from other systems, choose
+          <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
           <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Security
-          Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>, enter
-          <userinput>514:udp</userinput> in the <guilabel>Other
-          ports:</guilabel> field, and select <guilabel>OK</guilabel>.
+          Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select
+          <guilabel>Other ports</guilabel>, and
+          <guibutton>Add</guibutton>. Enter <userinput>514</userinput>
+          in the <guilabel>Port(s)</guilabel> field, and specify
+          <userinput>udp</userinput> as the
+          <guilabel>Protocol</guilabel>.
         </para>
       </note>
     </section>


Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml	5 Mar 2006 11:20:22 -0000	1.11
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml	5 Mar 2006 21:15:31 -0000	1.12
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@
     <para>
       By default the firewall is enabled, with a simple set of rules
       that allow connections to be made from your system to others, but
-      permit only network browsing and 
+      permit only network browsing and
       <indexterm>
         <primary>SSH (Secure SHell)</primary>
         <secondary>firewall configuration</secondary>
@@ -170,11 +170,13 @@
     </tip>
     <para>
       If a service uses more than one port number, enter each port. For
-      example, to allow users on the system to access their mail with an
-      IMAP service, add <userinput>imap</userinput> or port number
-      <userinput>143</userinput>, and <userinput>imaps</userinput>, or
-      port number <userinput>993</userinput> for IMAP with SSL
-      encryption. Both IMAP ports use the TCP protocol.
+      example, an IMAP service enables users to access their e-mail from
+      another system with either a standard connection to TCP port 143,
+      or with an encrypted connection to TCP port 993. To permit IMAP
+      connections to your system, add <userinput>imap</userinput> or
+      port number <userinput>143</userinput>, and
+      <userinput>imaps</userinput>, or port number
+      <userinput>993</userinput>, for IMAP with SSL encryption.
     </para>
 
     <para>