Branch 'f12' - en-US/Multimedia.xml

[Rüdiger Landmann]

 en-US/Multimedia.xml |   30 +++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 9afd613d56eca2495c00efc820026607d60fa2d3
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Sep 14 11:12:15 2009 +1000

    More markup in Multimedia

diff --git a/en-US/Multimedia.xml b/en-US/Multimedia.xml
index 95ca7b3..c789a91 100644
--- a/en-US/Multimedia.xml
+++ b/en-US/Multimedia.xml
@@ -20,17 +20,17 @@
 	  <primary>Thusnelda</primary>
 	</indexterm>
 	<para>
-	  In support of Free Culture, the open web and to reduce the
-	  hold of proprietary and patent encumbered codecs, Red Hat
+	  In support of free culture, the open web, and to reduce the
+	  hold of proprietary and patent-encumbered codecs, Red Hat
 	  has been sponsoring improvements on the open Ogg Theora
-	  video codec implementation codenamed Thusnelda via
+	  video codec implementation codenamed <application>Thusnelda</application> via
 	  Christopher Montgomery (xiphmont), who created the format
 	  and work has resulted in drastic improvements to the
 	  codec. This release features this next generation codec,
-	  compared to libtheora 1.0, the new encoder can produce
+	  compared to <application>libtheora 1.0</application>, the new encoder can produce
 	  comparable quality encodings at a lower bitrate, or better
 	  quality at the same bitrate. All applications using
-	  libtheora library including all the Gstreamer applications
+	  <application>libtheora</application> library including all the <application>GStreamer</application> applications
 	  will automatically and transparently be taking advantage of
 	  the improvements.
 	</para>
@@ -45,13 +45,13 @@
 	</indexterm>
 	<para>
 	  Fedora developers have been made several improvements to the
-	  PulseAudio system. More details here. These include the
+	  <application>PulseAudio</application> system. More details are available from <ulink url="http://0pointer.de/blog/projects/oh-nine-sixteen.html"></ulink>. These include the
 	  following:
 	  <itemizedlist>
-	    <listitem><para>A New Mixer Logic</para></listitem>
-	    <listitem><para>UPnP MediaServer Support</para></listitem>
-	    <listitem><para>Hotplug Support Improved</para></listitem>
-	    <listitem><para>Surround Sound Support for Event Sounds
+	    <listitem><para>new mixer logic</para></listitem>
+	    <listitem><para>UPnP MediaServer support</para></listitem>
+	    <listitem><para>hotplug support improved</para></listitem>
+	    <listitem><para>surround sound support for event sounds
 	    </para></listitem>
 	  </itemizedlist>
 	</para>
@@ -65,12 +65,12 @@
 	  <primary>Fedora Studio</primary>
 	</indexterm>
 	<para>
-	  Fedora Studio is an optional multimedia-menus package to
-	  provided the user who want to have their audio &amp; video
+	  <application>Fedora Studio</application> is an optional multimedia menus package that
+	  allows users to have their audio and video
 	  applications classified in their desktop menu. In previous
-	  versions of Fedora all multimedia applications were in one
-	  large group, this package makes it easier for users to
-	  navigate audio &amp; video applications.
+	  versions of Fedora, all multimedia applications were in one
+	  large group. This package makes it easier for users to
+	  navigate audio and video applications.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>