Branch 'f13' - 2 commits - en-US/adminoptions.xml en-US/Installation_Guide.ent en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1a.xml en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1.xml en-US/Steps_Hd_Install-x86.xml en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml en-US/vnc_Modes_Chapter.xml en-US/vnc_Viewer_Chapter.xml

Rüdiger Landmann rlandmann at fedoraproject.org
Fri Apr 30 11:49:40 UTC 2010


 en-US/Installation_Guide.ent                           |    6 -
 en-US/Steps_Hd_Install-x86.xml                         |    3 
 en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1.xml     |    6 -
 en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1a.xml    |    6 +
 en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml |   42 ++-----------
 en-US/adminoptions.xml                                 |   52 +++++------------
 en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml                     |   15 +---
 en-US/vnc_Modes_Chapter.xml                            |   16 +----
 en-US/vnc_Viewer_Chapter.xml                           |    8 --
 9 files changed, 52 insertions(+), 102 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 943eeb193619e2acb4f5e31ae89ac587fc897efe
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Fri Apr 30 21:48:53 2010 +1000

    move verbatim content out of block elements

diff --git a/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install-x86.xml b/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install-x86.xml
index 00d77bb..7bb3214 100644
--- a/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install-x86.xml
@@ -28,6 +28,9 @@
 		<listitem>
 			<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1.xml"/>
 			<!-- Using a set of CD-ROMs - Create CD-ROM ISO image files from each -->
+			
+			<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1a.xml"/>
+			<!-- screen -->
 		</listitem>
 		
 		<listitem>
diff --git a/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1.xml b/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1.xml
index 39352b1..1c50cd7 100644
--- a/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1.xml
@@ -1,13 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.3//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.3/docbookx.dtd" [
-
-
-
 ]>
 
 <para>
 	Using a set of CD-ROMs, or a DVD &mdash; Create ISO image files from each installation CD-ROM, or from the DVD. For each CD-ROM (once for the DVD), execute the following command on a Linux system:
-<screen>
-<command>dd if=/dev/cdrom of=/tmp/<replaceable>file-name</replaceable>.iso</command>
-</screen>
 </para>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1a.xml b/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1a.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..d6db5b4
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Steps_Hd_Install_x86_ppc_s390_listitem_1a.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,6 @@
+<?xml version="1.0"?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.3//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.3/docbookx.dtd" [
+]>
+
+<screen><command>dd if=/dev/cdrom of=/tmp/<replaceable>file-name</replaceable>.iso</command>
+</screen>
diff --git a/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml b/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml
index 50eee6b..a25f74b 100644
--- a/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml
@@ -15,28 +15,16 @@
 			<para>
 				For DVD:
 			</para>
-			
-			<para>
-				<screen>
-					<command>
-					mv <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>f&PRODVER;.iso <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory/</replaceable>
-					</command>
-				</screen>
-			</para>
+<screen><command>mv <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>f&PRODVER;.iso <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory/</replaceable>
+</command></screen>
 		</listitem>
 		
 		<listitem>
 			<para>
 				For CDROMs:
 			</para>
-			
-			<para>
-				<screen>
-					<command>
-					mv <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>f&PRODVER;-disk*.iso <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory/</replaceable>
-					</command>
-				</screen>
-			</para>
+<screen><command>mv <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>f&PRODVER;-disk*.iso <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory/</replaceable>
+</command></screen>
 		</listitem>
 	</itemizedlist>
 	<para>
@@ -66,27 +54,13 @@
 	<para>
 		To export to a specific system:
 	</para>
-	
-	<para>
-		<screen>
-			<command>
-				<replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable> <replaceable>client.ip.address</replaceable>
-			</command>
-		</screen>
-	</para>
-		
+<screen><command><replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable> <replaceable>client.ip.address</replaceable>
+</command></screen>
 	<para>
 		To export to all systems use an entry such as:
 	</para>
-	
-	<para>
-		<screen>
-			<command>
-				<replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable> *
-			</command>
-		</screen>
-	</para>
-	
+<screen><command><replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable> *
+</command></screen>
 	<para>
 		Start the NFS daemon (on a Fedora system, use <command>/sbin/service nfs start</command>). If NFS is already running, reload the configuration file (on a Fedora system use <command>/sbin/service nfs reload</command>).
 	</para>
diff --git a/en-US/adminoptions.xml b/en-US/adminoptions.xml
index f8bbd10..b0444e3 100644
--- a/en-US/adminoptions.xml
+++ b/en-US/adminoptions.xml
@@ -18,8 +18,7 @@
     If you specify more than one option, separate each of the options by
     a single space. For example:
   </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux <replaceable>option1</replaceable> <replaceable>option2</replaceable> <replaceable>option3</replaceable></userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux <replaceable>option1</replaceable> <replaceable>option2</replaceable> <replaceable>option3</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
   <note>
     <title>Anaconda Boot Options</title>
@@ -100,8 +99,7 @@
         <userinput>gr</userinput> identify the Greek language and the
         Greek keyboard layout:
       </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux lang=<replaceable>el_GR</replaceable> keymap=<replaceable>gr</replaceable></userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux lang=<replaceable>el_GR</replaceable> keymap=<replaceable>gr</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
     </section>
 
@@ -116,8 +114,7 @@
         as a boot option. For example, to set the display resolution to
         1024x768, enter:
       </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux resolution=<replaceable>1024x768</replaceable></userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux resolution=<replaceable>1024x768</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
       <para>
         To run the installation process in
@@ -126,8 +123,7 @@
         </indexterm>
         <option>text</option> mode, enter:
       </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux text</userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux text</userinput>
 </screen>
       <para>
         To enable support for a
@@ -156,8 +152,7 @@
 	<para>
 		The boot option
 	</para>
-<screen>
-  <userinput>linux updates</userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux updates</userinput>
 </screen>
 	<para>
 		presents you with a prompt that asks you for a floppy disk containing <application>anaconda</application> updates. You do not need to specify this option if you are performing a network installation and have already placed the updates image contents in <filename>rhupdates/</filename> on the server.
@@ -254,8 +249,7 @@
         system that uses the IP address
         <systemitem class="ipaddress">192.168.1.10</systemitem>:
       </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux ip=<replaceable>192.168.1.10</replaceable> netmask=<replaceable>255.255.255.0</replaceable> gateway=<replaceable>192.168.1.1</replaceable> dns=<replaceable>192.168.1.2,192.168.1.3</replaceable></userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux ip=<replaceable>192.168.1.10</replaceable> netmask=<replaceable>255.255.255.0</replaceable> gateway=<replaceable>192.168.1.1</replaceable> dns=<replaceable>192.168.1.2,192.168.1.3</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
       <!-- <note>
         <title>Configuring the Installed System</title>
@@ -316,8 +310,7 @@
         To enable remote graphical access to the installation system,
         enter two options at the prompt:
       </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux vnc vncpassword=<replaceable>qwerty</replaceable></userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux vnc vncpassword=<replaceable>qwerty</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
       <para>
         The <option>vnc</option> option enables the VNC service. The
@@ -375,8 +368,7 @@ Press &lt;enter&gt; for a shell</screen>
         <application>vncviewer</application> as a listener. In a
         terminal window, enter the command:
       </para>
-<screen>
- <userinput>vncviewer -listen</userinput>
+<screen><userinput>vncviewer -listen</userinput>
 </screen>
       <note>
         <title>Firewall Reconfiguration Required</title>
@@ -416,8 +408,7 @@ Press &lt;enter&gt; for a shell</screen>
         <prompt>boot:</prompt>
         prompt:
       </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux vnc vncpassword=<replaceable>qwerty</replaceable> vncconnect=<replaceable>desktop.mydomain.com:5500</replaceable></userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux vnc vncpassword=<replaceable>qwerty</replaceable> vncconnect=<replaceable>desktop.mydomain.com:5500</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
     </section>
 
@@ -434,8 +425,7 @@ Press &lt;enter&gt; for a shell</screen>
         prompt:
       </para>
 <!--SE: The "text" option is necessary to stop the installer switching to graphical mode and losing the telnet interface. This is expected behavior. -->
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux text telnet</userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux text telnet</userinput>
 </screen>
       <para>
         You may then connect to the installation system with the
@@ -443,8 +433,7 @@ Press &lt;enter&gt; for a shell</screen>
         command requires the name or IP address of the installation
         system:
       </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>telnet computer.mydomain.com</userinput>
+<screen><userinput>telnet computer.mydomain.com</userinput>
 </screen>
       <warning>
         <title>Telnet Access Requires No Password</title>
@@ -485,8 +474,7 @@ Press &lt;enter&gt; for a shell</screen>
       <prompt>boot:</prompt>
       prompt:
     </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux syslog=<replaceable>192.168.1.20:514</replaceable></userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux syslog=<replaceable>192.168.1.20:514</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
     <section id="sn-remote-logging-logserver">
       <title>Configuring a Log Server</title>
@@ -517,16 +505,14 @@ Press &lt;enter&gt; for a shell</screen>
         <filename>/etc/rsyslog.conf</filename>. You must use
         <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> privileges to
         edit the file <filename>/etc/rsyslog.conf</filename>. Uncomment the
-	following lines by removing the hash preceding them:
-	<screen><computeroutput>$ModLoad imudp.so</computeroutput>
-	<computeroutput>$UDPServerRun 514</computeroutput></screen>
-      </para>
+	following lines by removing the hash preceding them:</para>
+<screen><computeroutput>$ModLoad imudp.so</computeroutput> 
+<computeroutput>$UDPServerRun 514</computeroutput></screen>
       <para>
         Restart the <command>rsyslog</command> service to apply the
         change:
       </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>su -c '/sbin/service rsyslog restart'</userinput>
+<screen><userinput>su -c '/sbin/service rsyslog restart'</userinput>
 </screen>
       <para>
         Enter the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>
@@ -597,8 +583,7 @@ Press &lt;enter&gt; for a shell</screen>
       the <option>ks</option> option to specify the name and location of
       the file:
     </para>
-<screen>
- <userinput>linux ks=<replaceable>location/kickstart-file.cfg</replaceable></userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux ks=<replaceable>location/kickstart-file.cfg</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
     <para>
       You may use Kickstart files that are held on either removable
@@ -655,8 +640,7 @@ Press &lt;enter&gt; for a shell</screen>
       the application
       <wordasword>http://server.mydomain.com/kickstart.cgi</wordasword>:
     </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux ks=http://server.mydomain.com/kickstart.cgi kssendmac</userinput>
+<screen><userinput>linux ks=http://server.mydomain.com/kickstart.cgi kssendmac</userinput>
 </screen>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-bootoptions-hardware">
diff --git a/en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml b/en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml
index b825812..e8f3943 100644
--- a/en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml
+++ b/en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml
@@ -87,11 +87,8 @@
 							prompt:
 						</para>
 
-						<para>
-							<screen>
-boot: <userinput>linux vnc</userinput>
-							</screen>
-						</para>
+<screen>boot: <userinput>linux vnc</userinput></screen>
+
 					</listitem>
 
 					<listitem>
@@ -120,11 +117,9 @@ boot: <userinput>linux vnc</userinput>
 							at the prompt:
 						</para>
 
-						<para>
-							<screen>
-boot: <userinput>linux vncconnect=<replaceable>HOST</replaceable></userinput>
-							</screen>
-						</para>
+
+<screen>boot: <userinput>linux vncconnect=<replaceable>HOST</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+
 					</listitem>
 				</orderedlist>
 			</listitem>
diff --git a/en-US/vnc_Modes_Chapter.xml b/en-US/vnc_Modes_Chapter.xml
index 38fd124..988aec0 100644
--- a/en-US/vnc_Modes_Chapter.xml
+++ b/en-US/vnc_Modes_Chapter.xml
@@ -44,11 +44,9 @@
 			format:
 		</para>
 
-		<para>
-			<screen>
-Running anaconda <replaceable>VERSION</replaceable>, the <replaceable>PRODUCT</replaceable> system installer - please wait...
-			</screen>
-		</para>
+
+<screen>Running anaconda <replaceable>VERSION</replaceable>, the <replaceable>PRODUCT</replaceable> system installer - please wait...</screen>
+
 
 		<para>
 			Anaconda will also tell you the IP address and
@@ -115,11 +113,9 @@ Running anaconda <replaceable>VERSION</replaceable>, the <replaceable>PRODUCT</r
 			<command>vncconnect</command> boot parameter:
 		</para>
 
-		<para>
-			<screen>
-boot: <userinput>linux vncconnect=<replaceable>HOST</replaceable></userinput>
-			</screen>
-		</para>
+
+<screen>boot: <userinput>linux vncconnect=<replaceable>HOST</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+
 
 		<para>
 			Replace HOST with your VNC viewer's IP address or
diff --git a/en-US/vnc_Viewer_Chapter.xml b/en-US/vnc_Viewer_Chapter.xml
index fc06b91..92553dd 100644
--- a/en-US/vnc_Viewer_Chapter.xml
+++ b/en-US/vnc_Viewer_Chapter.xml
@@ -34,11 +34,9 @@
 			<para>
 				VNC clients are available in the repositories of most Linux distributions. Use your package manager to search for a client for your chosen distribution. For example, on Fedora, install the <!-- RHEL vnc --><package>tigervnc</package> package:
 			</para>
-			<para>
-				<screen>
-# <userinput>yum install tigervnc</userinput><!-- RHEL vnc -->
-				</screen>
-			</para>
+
+<screen># <userinput>yum install tigervnc</userinput><!-- RHEL vnc --></screen>
+
 		</listitem>
 		<listitem>
 			<para>


commit 819a16a92f9dd30893cd30a67f47cae791fb8785
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Fri Apr 30 21:16:06 2010 +1000

    update ent file

diff --git a/en-US/Installation_Guide.ent b/en-US/Installation_Guide.ent
index 91c07da..0dbe2dc 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation_Guide.ent
+++ b/en-US/Installation_Guide.ent
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <!ENTITY PRODUCT "Fedora Documentation">
-<!ENTITY PRODVER "12">
-<!ENTITY PREVVER "11">
+<!ENTITY PRODVER "13">
+<!ENTITY PREVVER "12">
 <!ENTITY BOOKID "install-guide">
-<!ENTITY YEAR "2009">
+<!ENTITY YEAR "2010">
 <!ENTITY HOLDER "Red Hat, Inc. and others">




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