r149 - community/trunk/en-US

[sradvan at fedoraproject.org]

Author: sradvan
Date: 2010-07-01 23:16:43 +0000 (Thu, 01 Jul 2010)
New Revision: 149

Modified:
   community/trunk/en-US/Communication.xml
Log:
minor re-wording

Modified: community/trunk/en-US/Communication.xml
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--- community/trunk/en-US/Communication.xml	2010-07-01 22:38:37 UTC (rev 148)
+++ community/trunk/en-US/Communication.xml	2010-07-01 23:16:43 UTC (rev 149)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 <section id="sect-Wireless_Guide-Hardware-Received_Signal_Strength_Indicator">
 <title>Received Signal Strength Indicator</title>
 			<para>
-This series of speeds used in Dynamic Rate Switching, and the current connected rate is usually intepreted in some sort of graphical form in your operating system as a graph or bar or other explanatory text. This is known as the <command>Received Signal Strength Indicator</command> (RSSI).
+The series of speeds used in Dynamic Rate Switching, and the current connected rate, are usually displayed in your operating system, perhaps as a graph or series of bars, or other explanatory text giving you an idea of your signal strength. This is known as the <command>Received Signal Strength Indicator</command> (RSSI). The RSSI can be very useful in determining signal strength, however there is no specification in the IEEE standards of how the RSSI should present its information, or even interpret the wireless information. Because of this, the RSSI tools can differ greatly between different operating systems. Any information presented to you by the RSSI should be evaluated with this point in mind.
 			</para>
 </section>
 <section id="sect-Wireless_Guide-Hardware-Connection_Modes">