[deployment-guide/comm-rel: 62/74] NetConf: comment out non-public template text, remarks

dsilas dsilas at fedoraproject.org
Tue Jul 6 21:14:37 UTC 2010


commit 10ea14703a9fa831320f510b21fb12c8856faa3b
Author: Douglas Silas <dhensley at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Jun 28 20:55:26 2010 +0200

    NetConf: comment out non-public template text, remarks

 en-US/Network_Configuration.xml |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Network_Configuration.xml b/en-US/Network_Configuration.xml
index ff3b9df..74172dd 100644
--- a/en-US/Network_Configuration.xml
+++ b/en-US/Network_Configuration.xml
@@ -517,7 +517,7 @@ NetworkManager (pid  1527) is running...
     <section
       id="sec-Establishing_a_Mobile_Broadband_Connection">
       <title>Establishing a Mobile Broadband Connection</title>
-      <remark>What is a <replaceable>&lt;type&gt;</replaceable> connection</remark>
+      <!--<remark>What is a <replaceable>&lt;type&gt;</replaceable> connection</remark>
       <remark>To establish a wireless connection, you need a computer capable of wi-fi connectivity, a wireless access point to connect to, and the passphrase of the access point unless it is open and unsecured.</remark>
       <para>You can configure a <replaceable>&lt;type&gt;</replaceable> connection by opening the <guilabel>Network Connections</guilabel> window and selecting the <guilabel>tab</guilabel> tab. For more information on opening the <guilabel>Network Connections</guilabel> window via <application>NetworkManager</application>'s Notification Area applet, or by running a shell command, refer to <xref
           linkend="sec-Configuring_New_and_Editing_Existing_Connections"/>.</para>
@@ -548,11 +548,11 @@ NetworkManager (pid  1527) is running...
       <para>Once you have finished editing your new <replaceable>&lt;type&gt;</replaceable> connection, click the <guibutton>Apply</guibutton> button and <application>NetworkManager</application> will immediately save your customized configuration. Given a correct configuration, you can connect to your new or customized connection by selecting it from the <application>NetworkManager</application> Notification Area applet. See <xref
           linkend="sec-Connecting_to_a_Network"/> for information on using your new or altered connection.</para>
       <para>At this point, you have created a new <replaceable>&lt;type&gt;</replaceable> connection. You can further configure your connection by selecting it in the <guilabel>Network Connections</guilabel> window and clicking <guilabel>Edit</guilabel> to return to the <guilabel>Editing</guilabel> dialog.</para>
-      <para>Then, to configure:</para>
+      <para>Then, to configure:</para>-->
       <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
+        <!--<listitem>
           <para>;</para>
-        </listitem>
+        </listitem>-->
         <listitem>
           <para>IPv4 settings for the connection, click the <guilabel>IPv4 Settings</guilabel> tab and proceed to <xref
               linkend="sec-Configuring_IPv4_Settings"/>; or,


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