[deployment-guide/comm-rel: 15/23] implemented qe comments

[dsilas]

commit 9d19962a1bc34e29682b97a0a796f848cf40ab9d
Author: fnadge <fnadge at redhat.com>
Date:   Fri Jul 16 14:16:59 2010 +0200

    implemented qe comments

 en-US/Users_and_Groups.xml |   15 ++++++---------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Users_and_Groups.xml b/en-US/Users_and_Groups.xml
index 38c56a2..590a986 100644
--- a/en-US/Users_and_Groups.xml
+++ b/en-US/Users_and_Groups.xml
@@ -144,10 +144,7 @@
       </figure>
       <para>To configure more advanced user properties, such as password expiration, modify the user's properties after adding the user. Refer to <xref
           linkend="s2-redhat-config-users-user-properties"/> for more information.</para>
-    </section>
-    <section
-      id="s2-redhat-config-users-user-properties">
-      <title>Modifying User Properties</title>
+    <bridgehead>Modifying User Properties</bridgehead>
       <indexterm
         significance="normal">
         <primary>user configuration</primary>
@@ -221,7 +218,7 @@
       <title>Adding a New Group</title>
       <indexterm
         significance="normal">
-        <primary>group configuration</primary>
+        <primary>group confi/sbin/nologinguration</primary>
         <secondary>adding groups</secondary>
       </indexterm>
       <para>To add a new user group, select <guibutton>Add Group</guibutton> from the toolbar. A window similar to <xref
@@ -828,7 +825,7 @@ crypt.crypt("<replaceable>&lt;password&gt;</replaceable>","<replaceable>&lt;salt
         inheritnum="ignore">
         <listitem>
           <para>A new line for <computeroutput>juan</computeroutput> is created in <filename>/etc/passwd</filename>.
-          <screen><code>juan:501:501::/home/juan:/bin/bash</code></screen>The line has the following characteristics:</para>
+          <screen><code>juan:x:501:501::/home/juan:/bin/bash</code></screen>The line has the following characteristics:</para>
           <itemizedlist>
             <listitem>
               <para>It begins with the username <computeroutput>juan</computeroutput>.</para>
@@ -837,7 +834,7 @@ crypt.crypt("<replaceable>&lt;password&gt;</replaceable>","<replaceable>&lt;salt
               <para>There is an <computeroutput>x</computeroutput> for the password field indicating that the system is using shadow passwords.</para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
-              <para>A UID greater than 499 is created. (Under &MAJOROS;. UIDs and GIDs below 500 are reserved for system use ∧should not be assigned to users.</para>
+              <para>A UID greater than 499 is created. Under &MAJOROS;. UIDs and GIDs below 500 are reserved for system use should not be assigned to users.</para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
               <para>A GID greater than 499 is created.</para>
@@ -1361,7 +1358,7 @@ crypt.crypt("<replaceable>&lt;password&gt;</replaceable>","<replaceable>&lt;salt
               <filename>/</filename>
             </entry>
             <entry>
-              <command>/sbin/nologin</command>
+              <command>/var/lib/rpcbind</command>
             </entry>
           </row>
           <row>
@@ -2531,7 +2528,7 @@ crypt.crypt("<replaceable>&lt;password&gt;</replaceable>","<replaceable>&lt;salt
         <para>Stores information about password aging.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Allows the use the <filename>/etc/login.defs</filename> file to enforce security policies.</para>
+        <para>Allows the <filename>/etc/login.defs</filename> file to enforce security policies.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
     <para>Most utilities provided by the <filename>shadow-utils</filename> package work properly whether or not shadow passwords are enabled. However, since password aging information is stored exclusively in the <filename>/etc/shadow</filename> file, any commands which create or modify password aging information do not work.</para>