[Virtualization_Guide] a few edits

[Chris Curran]

commit ac4b2041d54c68c6aedeb170d786c7c6ccc1c4c8
Author: Chris Curran <ccurran at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Jun 7 10:35:47 2010 +1000

    a few edits

 en-US/Storage_Pools_Dedicated_Disk.xml |   17 ++++++++---------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Storage_Pools_Dedicated_Disk.xml b/en-US/Storage_Pools_Dedicated_Disk.xml
index 7b6b277..3a2dbc0 100644
--- a/en-US/Storage_Pools_Dedicated_Disk.xml
+++ b/en-US/Storage_Pools_Dedicated_Disk.xml
@@ -2,13 +2,13 @@
 <!DOCTYPE chapter PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
 ]>
 <section id="sect-Virtualization-Storage_Pools-Creating-Dedicated_Disk_Devices">
-	<title>Dedicated Disk Devices</title>
+	<title>Dedicated storage devices</title>
 	<para>
-		This section covers using dedicated disk devices to store virtualized guests.
+		This section covers dedicating storage devices to virtualized guests.
 	</para>
 
 	<section>
-		<title>Creating a dedicated disk storage pool using the Virtual Machine Manager GUI</title>
+		<title>Creating a dedicated disk storage pool using virt-manager</title>
 		<para>
 			Placeholder
 		</para>
@@ -16,13 +16,12 @@
 
 	<section>
 		<title>Creating a dedicated disk storage pool using virsh</title>
-		<warning>
+		<para>This procedure creates a new storage pool using a dedicated disk device with the <command>virsh</command> command. </para>
+		<warning><title>Warning</title>
 			<para>
-				The disk used for this procedure must not have data on it you want to keep!
-			</para>
-			<para>
-				This process will destroy the existing data on the disk!
+				Dedicating a disk to a storage pool will reformat and erase all data presently stored on the disk device. Back up the storage device before commencing the procedure.
 			</para>
+			
 		</warning>
 
 		<procedure>
@@ -31,7 +30,7 @@
 					Create a GPT disk label on the disk
 				</title>
 				<para>
-					We relabel the dedicated disk with a <firstterm>GUID Partition Table</firstterm> (GPT) disk label. GPT disk labels allow for creating a large number of partitions (up to 128, more with configuration) on each device, many more than the previous <computeroutput>msdos</computeroutput> style partition table.
+					The disk Relabel the disk with a <firstterm>GUID Partition Table</firstterm> (GPT) disk label. GPT disk labels allow for creating a large number of partitions (up to 128, more with configuration) on each device, many more than the previous <computeroutput>msdos</computeroutput> style partition table.
 				</para>
 				<screen># parted /dev/sdb
 GNU Parted 2.1