[deployment-guide/comm-rel: 7/35] Updated the Date and Time Properties section.

dsilas dsilas at fedoraproject.org
Wed Jun 9 12:35:19 UTC 2010


commit 708943b49dd85242cf530f777b6c10582c3e32ef
Author: Jaromir Hradilek <jhradile at redhat.com>
Date:   Tue Jun 1 15:09:01 2010 +0200

    Updated the Date and Time Properties section.

 en-US/Date_and_Time_Configuration.xml |   49 +++++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Date_and_Time_Configuration.xml b/en-US/Date_and_Time_Configuration.xml
index e67c736..dd09f7d 100644
--- a/en-US/Date_and_Time_Configuration.xml
+++ b/en-US/Date_and_Time_Configuration.xml
@@ -52,9 +52,9 @@
         <primary>date configuration</primary>
       </indexterm>
       <para>
-        As shown in <xref linkend="dateconfig-time-date" />, the first tabbed window that appears is for configuring the system date and time.
+        As shown in <xref linkend="figu-Date_and_Time-Date_and_Time" />, the <application>Date/Time Properties</application> tool is divided into two separate tabs. The tab containing the configuration of the current date and time is shown by default.
       </para>
-      <figure float="0" id="dateconfig-time-date">
+      <figure float="0" id="figu-Date_and_Time-Date_and_Time">
         <title>Date and Time Properties</title>
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -62,25 +62,26 @@
           </imageobject>
           <textobject>
             <para>
-              Time and Date Properties
+              Date and Time Properties
             </para>
           </textobject>
         </mediaobject>
       </figure>
       <para>
-        To change the date, use the arrows to the left and right of the month to change the month, use the arrows to the left and right of the year to change the year, and click on the day of the week to change the day of the week.
+        To set up your system manually, use following steps:
       </para>
-      <para>
-        To change the time, use the up and down arrow buttons beside the <guilabel>Hour</guilabel>, <guilabel>Minute</guilabel>, and <guilabel>Second</guilabel> in the <guilabel>Time</guilabel> section.
-      </para>
-      <para>
-        Clicking the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> button applies any changes made to the date and time, the NTP daemon settings, and the time zone settings. It also exits the program.
-      </para>
-<!--
-    </section>
-    <section id="s1-dateconfig-ntp">
-      <title>Network Time Protocol (NTP) Properties</title>
--->
+      <procedure>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            <emphasis>Change the current date.</emphasis> Use the arrows to the left and right of the month and year to change the month and year respectively. Then click inside the calendar to select the day of the month.
+          </para>
+        </step>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            <emphasis>Change the current time.</emphasis> Use the up and down arrow buttons beside the <guilabel>Hour</guilabel>, <guilabel>Minute</guilabel>, and <guilabel>Second</guilabel>, or replace the values directly.
+          </para>
+        </step>
+      </procedure>
       <indexterm significance="normal">
         <primary>time configuration</primary>
         <secondary>synchronize with NTP server</secondary>
@@ -105,9 +106,9 @@
         </primary>
       </indexterm>
       <para>
-        As shown in <xref linkend="dateconfig-ntp" />, the second tabbed window that appears is for configuring NTP.
+        However, if you prefer the automatic setup, select the checkbox labeled <guilabel>Synchronize date and time over the network</guilabel> instead. This will display the list of available NTP servers as shown in <xref linkend="figu-Date_and_Time-Network_Time_Protocol" />.
       </para>
-      <figure float="0" id="dateconfig-ntp">
+      <figure float="0" id="figu-Date_and_Time-Network_Time_Protocol">
         <title>Network Time Protocol Properties</title>
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -115,16 +116,22 @@
           </imageobject>
           <textobject>
             <para>
-              NTP Properties
+              Network Time Protocol Properties
             </para>
           </textobject>
         </mediaobject>
       </figure>
       <para>
-        The Network Time Protocol (NTP) daemon synchronizes the system clock with a remote time server or time source. The application allows you to configure an NTP daemon to synchronize your system clock with a remote server. To enable this feature, select <guibutton>Enable Network Time Protocol</guibutton>. This enables the <guilabel>NTP Servers</guilabel> list and other options. You can choose one of the predefined servers, edit a predefined server by clicking the <guibutton>Edit</guibutton> or add a new server name by clicking <guibutton>Add</guibutton>. Your system does not start synchronizing with the NTP server until you click <guibutton>OK</guibutton>. After clicking <guibutton>OK</guibutton>, the configuration is saved and the NTP daemon is started (or restarted if it is already running).
+        Here you can choose one of the predefined servers, edit a predefined server by clicking the <guibutton>Edit</guibutton> button, or add a new server name by clicking <guibutton>Add</guibutton>. In the <guilabel>Advanced Options</guilabel>, you can also select whether you want to synchronize the system clock before starting the service, and if you wish to use a local time source.
       </para>
+      <note>
+        <title>Note</title>
+        <para>
+          Your system does not start synchronizing with the NTP server until you click the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> button at the bottom of the window to confirm your changes.
+        </para>
+      </note>
       <para>
-        Clicking the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> button applies any changes made to the date and time, the NTP daemon settings, and the time zone settings. It also exits the program.
+        Clicking the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> button applies any changes made to the date and time settings and exits the application.
       </para>
     </section>
     <section id="sect-Date_and_Time_Configuration-Time_Zone">
@@ -152,7 +159,7 @@
           </imageobject>
           <textobject>
             <para>
-              Timezone Properties
+              Time Zone Properties
             </para>
           </textobject>
         </mediaobject>


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