[virtualization-guide: 1/3] Very minor wording adjustments.

[Justin Clift]

commit 372eb73ae7d660529fd9a9272f665b34a6cc750b
Author: Justin Clift <justin at salasaga.org>
Date:   Thu Jun 10 03:45:27 2010 +1000

    Very minor wording adjustments.

 en-US/Storage_Pools_SRP.xml |   11 +++++++----
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Storage_Pools_SRP.xml b/en-US/Storage_Pools_SRP.xml
index ab6d147..a3cbb49 100644
--- a/en-US/Storage_Pools_SRP.xml
+++ b/en-US/Storage_Pools_SRP.xml
@@ -13,10 +13,10 @@
 		</title>
 		<important>
 			<para>
-				Prior to commencing the procedure in this section, the SRP target LUNs must be configured and available to the host. Doing so is beyond the scope of this document.   
+				Prior to commencing the procedure in this section, the SRP target LUNs must be configured and available to the host.   
 			</para>
 			<para>
-			 	Please consult your SRP target vendor for the steps required.
+			 	The configuration steps to achieve this are vendor specific, and beyond the scope of this document. Please consult your SRP target vendor for the steps required.
 			</para>
 		</important>
 		<procedure>
@@ -43,14 +43,17 @@ id_ext=0002c9020021fc1c,ioc_guid=0002c9020021fc1c,dgid=fe800000000000000002c9020
 				<substeps>
 					<step>
 						<para>
-							Use the <command>srp_daemon</command> command, also part of the <package>srptools</package> package. When run with the <parameter>-eo</parameter>, each visible SRP LUN is attached to the host server as a disk. This command doesn't produce any output of it own however, unless an error occurs.
+							Use the <command>srp_daemon</command> command, also part of the <package>srptools</package> package. When run with the <parameter>-eo</parameter> parameter, each visible SRP LUN is attached to the host server as a disk. This command doesn't produce any output unless an error occurs.
 						</para>
 						<screen># srp_daemon -eo
 #</screen>
 					</step>
 					<step>
 						<para>
-							If the <command>srp_daemon</command> command succeeded, you will be able to view the new disks attached to the system. Use the <command>sfdisk</command> command, part of the <package>util-linux-ng</package> package.  When run with the <parameter>-l</parameter>, each disk visible to the host server is shown. The SRP LUNs should be included in the output.
+							If the <command>srp_daemon</command> command succeeded, you will be able to view the new disks attached to the system. Use the <command>sfdisk</command> command, part of the <package>util-linux-ng</package> package, to do this.
+						</para>
+						<para>
+							When run with the <parameter>-l</parameter> parameter, each disk visible to the host server is shown. The SRP LUNs will be included in the output.
 						</para>
 						<screen># sfdisk -l
 Disk /dev/sdk: 20484 cylinders, 64 heads, 32 sectors/track