en-US/DatabaseServers.xml en-US/MailServers.xml en-US/Samba.xml en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml en-US/WebServers.xml
Rüdiger Landmann
rlandmann at fedoraproject.org
Thu Mar 18 13:39:25 UTC 2010
en-US/DatabaseServers.xml | 10 +++++-----
en-US/MailServers.xml | 17 ++++++++---------
en-US/Samba.xml | 6 +++---
en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
en-US/WebServers.xml | 2 +-
5 files changed, 31 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)
New commits:
commit 639c45d69569f8c2322e50d226139f2af08cbcaf
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date: Thu Mar 18 23:38:19 2010 +1000
Copyedit
diff --git a/en-US/DatabaseServers.xml b/en-US/DatabaseServers.xml
index 3d33ae4..c16f981 100644
--- a/en-US/DatabaseServers.xml
+++ b/en-US/DatabaseServers.xml
@@ -10,14 +10,14 @@
<title>db4</title>
<para>
Fedora &PRODVER; includes version 4.8.26 of the Berkeley
- <package>db4</package> database. This release features improved
- performance, a new, db_sql tool, and additional APIs.
+ <application>db4</application> database. This release features improved
+ performance, a new db_sql tool, and additional APIs.
</para>
</section>
<section>
<title>MySQL</title>
<para>
- <package>mysql</package> has been updated to 5.1.44 (from 5.1.39). This
+ <application>mysql</application> has been updated to 5.1.44 (from 5.1.39). This
release includes new replication capability. Refer to the MySQL release
notes at <ulink type="http" url="http://lists.mysql.com/announce/664" />,
<ulink type="http" url="http://lists.mysql.com/announce/660" />, <ulink
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<section>
<title>Postgresql</title>
<para>
- <package>postgresql</package> has been updated to 8.4.2. Although this is
+ <application>postgresql</application> has been updated to 8.4.2. Although this is
primarily a bug fix release, if you have any hash indices, you should
REINDEX those tables after upgrading (no dump is required). For a complete
listing of bug fixes refer to
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
<section>
<title>sqlite</title>
<para>
- For Fedora &PRODVER;, <package>sqlite</package> has been upgraded from
+ For Fedora &PRODVER;, <application>sqlite</application> has been upgraded from
3.6.17 to 3.6.23. This release adds a number of new pragmas and functions,
as well as many fixes. Refer to <ulink type="http"
url="http://www.sqlite.org/changes.html" /> for a complete list of
diff --git a/en-US/MailServers.xml b/en-US/MailServers.xml
index 1dca981..a63437a 100644
--- a/en-US/MailServers.xml
+++ b/en-US/MailServers.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
<section>
<title>cyrusimap </title>
<para>
- The latest stable/current release of the <package>cyrus-imapd</package>
+ The latest stable and current release of the <application>cyrus-imapd</application>
server is 2.3.16 which includes support for replicated mailboxes, unified
murder configuration, delayed expunge, separate metadata partitions, Sieve
extensions, and much more. It requires SASLv2. For specifics about the
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
<section>
<title>dovecot </title>
<para>
- <package>dovecot</package> has been upgraded to 1.2.11. In earlier
+ <application>dovecot</application> has been upgraded to 1.2.11. In earlier
versions, some very large headers were sent which could result in a denial
of service. This update fixes that problem, in addition to some security
improvements. Details can be found at <ulink
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
<title>fetchmail </title>
<para>
Fedora &PRODVER; includes version 6.3.14 of
- <package>fetchmail</package>. This update fixes some security related
+ <application>fetchmail</application>. This update fixes some security-related
bugs and restores IMAP2 support for some servers. Details of the changes
can be found at <ulink
url="http://developer.berlios.de/project/shownotes.php?group_id=1824&release_id=17213.">http://developer.berlios.de/project/shownotes.php?group_id=1824&release_id=17213.</ulink>
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
<section>
<title>sendmail </title>
<para>
- <package>sendmail</package> has been updated to 8.14.4. There are a number
+ <application>sendmail</application> has been updated to 8.14.4. There are a number
of bug fixes, including some security improvements.
</para>
</section>
@@ -55,11 +55,10 @@
<section>
<title>Zarafa </title>
<para>
- <package>zarafa</package> is replacement for Microsoft Outlook, which is
- new to Fedora. It provides an integration with existing Linux mail
- servers and a web access with 'Look & Feel' similar to Outlook using
- Ajax. Zarafa includes an IMAP4 and a POP3 gateway as well as an
- iCal/CalDAV gateway, and can combine the usability with the stability and
+ <application>Zarafa</application> is a mail server and collaboration tool that is new to Fedora. It provides integration with existing Linux mail
+ servers and uses <firstterm>Ajax</firstterm> to create a user interface that is intuitive to users of <application>Microsoft Outlook</application>.
+ Zarafa includes an IMAP4 and a POP3 gateway as well as an
+ iCal/CalDAV gateway. It combines a high degree of usability with the stability and
flexibility of a Linux server.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Samba.xml b/en-US/Samba.xml
index 4a79a84..d61a6fc 100644
--- a/en-US/Samba.xml
+++ b/en-US/Samba.xml
@@ -6,14 +6,14 @@
<title>Samba (Windows Compatibility)</title>
<remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Samba">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Samba</ulink></remark>
<para>
- <package>samba</package> and it's various clients, add-ins and guis have
+ <package>samba</package> and its various clients, add-ins and GUIs have
been updated to 3.5.0. Changes include use of full Windows resolution for
- timestamps and caching of credentials. The <citation>Using Samba</citation>
+ timestamps and caching of credentials. The <citetitle>Using Samba</citetitle>
HTML book is no longer included, but is available at <ulink type="http"
url="http://www.samba.org/samba/docs/using_samba/toc.html" />.
</para>
<para>
- There are some changes to smb.conf. Administrators should review <ulink
+ There are some changes to <filename>smb.conf</filename>. Administrators should review <ulink
type="html" url="http://www.samba.org/samba/history/samba-3.5.0.html" /> for
all the details.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml b/en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml
index f144ae5..8b72fd1 100644
--- a/en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml
+++ b/en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml
@@ -22,46 +22,46 @@
<section>
<title>EMBOSS </title>
<para>
- Version 6.2.0 of <package>EMBOSS</package> now includes the capability to
+ Version 6.2.0 of <application>EMBOSS</application> now includes the capability to
read additional file formats as well as updated versions of current
formats. There are a number of new capabilities, and some changes
required in scripts. Details of these changes can be found at <ulink
- url="http://emboss.sourceforge.net/developers/changelog.html#0.">http://emboss.sourceforge.net/developers/changelog.html#0.</ulink>
+ url="http://emboss.sourceforge.net/developers/changelog.html#0"></ulink>.
</para>
</section>
<section>
<title>Macaulay2 </title>
<para>
- <package>Macaulay2</package> now includes certification of new packages
+ <application>Macaulay2</application> now includes certification of new packages
that have been approved for publication in peer-reviewed journals, as well
as a large number of new programs and packages. Some capabilities have
been improved or changed. Users should review <ulink
- url="http://www.math.uiuc.edu/Macaulay2/doc/Macaulay2-1.3.1/share/doc/Macaulay2/Macaulay2Doc/html/_changes_cm_sp1.3.html">http://www.math.uiuc.edu/Macaulay2/doc/Macaulay2-1.3.1/share/doc/Macaulay2/Macaulay2Doc/html/_changes_cm_sp1.3.html</ulink>
+ url="http://www.math.uiuc.edu/Macaulay2/doc/Macaulay2-1.3.1/share/doc/Macaulay2/Macaulay2Doc/html/_changes_cm_sp1.3.html"></ulink>
for details on these improvements. </para>
</section>
<section>
<title>R </title>
<para>
- <package>R</package> has been upgraded to 2.10.1. There are a number of
+ <application>R</application> has been upgraded to 2.10.1. There are a number of
new features as well as a long list of bugfixes. For specifics refer to
<ulink
- url="https://svn.r-project.org/R/trunk/NEWS">https://svn.r-project.org/R/trunk/NEWS</ulink>
- (scroll down to 2.10 and 2.10.1). Many R-related packages and emacs modes
+ url="https://svn.r-project.org/R/trunk/NEWS"></ulink>
+ (scroll down to 2.10 and 2.10.1). Many <application>R</application>-related packages and <application>emacs</application> modes
have also been upgraded. </para>
</section>
<section>
<title>ugene </title>
<para>
- Fedora &PRODVER; includes version 1.6.1 of <package>ugene</package>.
- The upgrade is "strongly recommended" as there are some fixes to serious
- bugs. If a user wishes to compile the package rather than installing from
- the RPM, they should review <ulink
- url="http://ugene.unipro.ru/news.html#160210">http://ugene.unipro.ru/news.html#160210</ulink>
- for specific actions they need to take to make the upgrade successful.
- This is not necessary for a normal install using yum or PackageKit.
+ Fedora &PRODVER; includes version 1.6.1 of <application>ugene</application>.
+ The upgrade is strongly recommended as there are some fixes to serious
+ bugs. If you prefer to compile the package rather than installing from
+ the RPM, you should review <ulink
+ url="http://ugene.unipro.ru/news.html#160210"></ulink>
+ for specific actions that you need to take to make the upgrade successful.
+ This is not necessary for a normal install using <application>yum</application> or <application>PackageKit</application>.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/WebServers.xml b/en-US/WebServers.xml
index a6c584d..4c1d974 100644
--- a/en-US/WebServers.xml
+++ b/en-US/WebServers.xml
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
<section>
<title>Apache</title>
<para>
- <package>httpd</package> has been upgraded from 2.2.13 to 2.2.14. This
+ <application>httpd</application> has been upgraded from 2.2.13 to 2.2.14. This
upgrade involves only bugfixes. Details may be found at <ulink
type="http" url="http://www.apache.org/dist/httpd/CHANGES_2.2" />.
</para>
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