en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.ent en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.xml

Rüdiger Landmann rlandmann at fedoraproject.org
Sun Mar 28 08:06:39 UTC 2010


 en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.ent |    2 +-
 en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.xml |    8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 3e85c1998b541dc29f9858e6e950ce8b3903e8ac
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Sun Mar 28 18:05:47 2010 +1000

    Tweak admonition titles and Bugzilla component

diff --git a/en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.ent b/en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.ent
index 130beff..bd1ac38 100644
--- a/en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.ent
+++ b/en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.ent
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!ENTITY PRODUCT "Fedora Documentation">
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "readme-live-images">
+<!ENTITY BOOKID "readme-live-image">
 <!ENTITY YEAR "2010">
 <!ENTITY HOLDER "Red Hat, Inc. and others">
 <!ENTITY PRODVER "13">
diff --git a/en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.xml b/en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.xml
index d6f8dec..3f02337 100644
--- a/en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.xml
+++ b/en-US/Fedora_Live_Images.xml
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 			This live system successfully boots and runs on most computers with 1&nbsp;GB or more installed system memory, or RAM.  Your computer must have the ability to boot from the device holding the live image media. For instance, if the live image is on a DVD, your computer must be able to boot from the DVD drive.
 		</para>
 		<important>
-			<title>Important — Live image Size</title>
+			<title>Important — Live image size</title>
 			<para>From Fedora&nbsp;13 (Goddard) onwards, the Fedora Live image exceeds 700&nbsp;MB in size and will no longer fit onto CD. You must use a DVD or USB device to hold the live image. If your computer does not support booting from USB, or does not have a DVD drive, you can still use a Live image from <ulink url="http://spins.fedoraproject.org/"></ulink> for an alternative desktop environment that is still CD-sized, such as the Xfce Spin Live image. 
 			</para>
 		</important>	
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
 					You can use the live image to evaluate whether Fedora recognizes and properly configures your hardware devices.
 				</para>
 				<important>
-					<title>Full Hardware Recognition</title>
+					<title>Important — Full hardware recognition</title>
 					<para>
 						In some cases, the live image might not offer the full range of hardware support offered by an installed Fedora system. You might be able to manually configure additional devices in the live image.  If you use the live image from a DVD, you must repeat these steps each time you use the live image.
 					</para>
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
 					Due to space constraints, fewer programs are included than in a full installation of Fedora. Your favorite applications may not be present in this live image, even though they may be present and run quite well in a full installation of Fedora.
 				</para>
 				<important>
-					<title>Live USB persistence</title>
+					<title>Important — Live USB persistence</title>
 					<para>
 						Live USB images with persistence allow you to install new applications on your Fedora system.  There is a limit to the space available for new applications.  If you decide to make many changes to the software installed, install Fedora to a hard disk first.
 					</para>
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
 				You can therefore test how Fedora interacts with your documents, photographs, and multimedia files, and how files created by programs running in the Fedora Live environment work when you transfer them to your existing computing environment.
 			</para>
 			<important>
-				<title>Important — Accessing Files using the Xfce Live Image</title>
+				<title>Important — Accessing files using the Xfce live image</title>
 				<para>
 					To access files on your hard disk using the Fedora Xfce Spin Live image, you must first mount the disk using <application>Gigolo</application>. Launch <application>Gigolo</application> from 
 					<menuchoice><guimenu>Xfce Menu</guimenu><guisubmenu>System</guisubmenu></menuchoice>. To mount a hard disk or partition, double click on its icon in the <application>Gigolo</application> window pane. Double-click on it again to view the files in the <application>Thunar</application> file manager.




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