[user-guide] Modify default descriptions to reflect F14.

Susan Lauber laubersm at fedoraproject.org
Fri Oct 15 01:36:54 UTC 2010


commit dc4d0ad72c50479546774726b4135586c7e09f23
Author: susan <susan at localhost.localdomain>
Date:   Thu Oct 14 21:36:36 2010 -0400

    Modify default descriptions to reflect F14.

 en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml |   20 ++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml b/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
index a8f65cc..66fbb5f 100644
--- a/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
+++ b/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@
 									</listitem>
 						<listitem>
 										<para>
-											<menuchoice><guilabel>Bookmark</guilabel></menuchoice>, a list of folders that you have bookmarked in <application>Nautilus</application>. 
+											The remaining items in this section are a list of folders that you have bookmarked in <application>Nautilus</application>. 
 										</para>
 									</listitem>
 								</itemizedlist>
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@
 						<listitem>
 				<!--                                                                                                                                                    Preferences                                                                                                                                                    -->
 							<para>
-							The <guisubmenu>Preferences</guisubmenu> menu contains tools that affect only your account, and only require normal user access. These links include: 
+							The <guisubmenu>Preferences</guisubmenu> menu contains tools that affect only your account, and only require normal user access. The choices will vary depending on the software installed and the following are common default choices: 
 							<itemizedlist>
 								<listitem>
 									<para>
@@ -458,11 +458,11 @@
 										<menuchoice><guilabel>Authentication</guilabel></menuchoice> allows you to control how the system verifies users who attempt to log in.
 										</para>
 									</listitem>
-									<listitem>
+				<!--not a default item			<listitem>
 										<para>
 										<menuchoice><guilabel>Bootloader</guilabel></menuchoice> lets you choose your default boot entry and the time the boot message is displayed.
 										</para>
-									</listitem>
+									</listitem> -->
 									<listitem>
 										<para>
 										<menuchoice><guilabel>Date and Time</guilabel></menuchoice> permits the system date and time to be changed.
@@ -473,11 +473,11 @@
 										<menuchoice><guilabel>Firewall</guilabel></menuchoice> link lets you setup and configure a firewall for your computer.
 										</para>
 									</listitem>
-									<listitem>
+					<!-- not a default item		<listitem>
 										<para>
 										<menuchoice><guilabel>Language</guilabel></menuchoice> allows you to change the default language.
 										</para>
-									</listitem>
+									</listitem> -->
 									<listitem>
 										<para>
 										<menuchoice><guilabel>Logical Volume Management</guilabel></menuchoice> lets you configure the LVM in a graphical setting.
@@ -513,14 +513,14 @@
 										<menuchoice><guilabel>Services</guilabel></menuchoice> lets you decide which services will run when the system starts.
 										</para>
 									</listitem>
-								<!--	<listitem>
+									<listitem>
 										<para>
 										<menuchoice><guilabel>Software Sources</guilabel></menuchoice> permits you to enable or disable software repositories.
 										</para>
-									</listitem> -->
+									</listitem> 
 									<listitem>
 										<para>
-										<menuchoice><guilabel>Update System</guilabel></menuchoice> looks for software updates at your selected software sources.
+										<menuchoice><guilabel>Software Update</guilabel></menuchoice> looks for software updates at your selected software sources.
 										</para>
 									</listitem>
 									<listitem>
@@ -755,7 +755,7 @@ Documents
 					</listitem>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							The <firstterm>Workspace Switcher</firstterm> is the group of squares situated on the far right. They allow you to move between <firstterm>workspaces</firstterm>. Workspaces have long been a feature of UNIX and Linux desktop environments. Each workspace provides a separate desktop where applications can be organized, and a corresponding window list panel. By default there are four workspaces available. To change this number, right-click on the workspace switcher and choose <menuchoice><guilabel>preferences</guilabel></menuchoice>.
+							The <firstterm>Workspace Switcher</firstterm> is the group of squares situated on the far right. They allow you to move between <firstterm>workspaces</firstterm>. Workspaces have long been a feature of UNIX and Linux desktop environments. Each workspace provides a separate desktop where applications can be organized, and a corresponding window list panel. By default there are two workspaces available. To change this number, right-click on the workspace switcher and choose <menuchoice><guilabel>preferences</guilabel></menuchoice>.
 						</para>
 						<note>
 							<title>Switching between workspaces </title>


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