[user-guide] minor adjustments for F14 fact checking phase.
Susan Lauber
laubersm at fedoraproject.org
Fri Oct 15 20:19:08 UTC 2010
commit 51d0a924db1ad5a7e754c2ca67057ef0da211a98
Author: Susan Lauber <laubersm at fedoraproject.org>
Date: Fri Oct 15 16:18:43 2010 -0400
minor adjustments for F14 fact checking phase.
en-US/Connecting_to_the_Internet.xml | 10 +++++-----
en-US/Media.xml | 2 +-
2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Connecting_to_the_Internet.xml b/en-US/Connecting_to_the_Internet.xml
index b7d8780..3528d87 100644
--- a/en-US/Connecting_to_the_Internet.xml
+++ b/en-US/Connecting_to_the_Internet.xml
@@ -206,14 +206,14 @@ The <guilabel>IPv6 Settings</guilabel> tab similarly allows the configuration of
<title>Mobile Broadband</title>
<para>
<!-- copied & pasted from features 13 -->
- In Fedora 13, once your card is inserted, you can easily create a Mobile Broadband connection, as indicated below. For many mobile broadband cards,
+ Once your card is inserted, you can easily create a Mobile Broadband connection, as indicated below. For many mobile broadband cards,
<application>Network Manager</application>
can visualize in the NM applet icon, cellular signal strength and technology, and listen for signal strength changes or poll modem-manager for such changes while connected. In this way, you are able to know when the device has a signal and if it is roaming or not.
</para>
<para>
<application>Network Manager</application>
- in Fedora 13, uses the gnome-bluetooth plugin to help to configure your Mobile Broadband with the service provider. Also, if you have a Bluetooth adapter and a mobile phone (GPRS) that supports Bluetooth DUN, you can pair the phone with the computer, and let
+ uses the gnome-bluetooth plugin to help to configure your Mobile Broadband with the service provider. Also, if you have a Bluetooth adapter and a mobile phone (GPRS) that supports Bluetooth DUN, you can pair the phone with the computer, and let
<application>Network Manager</application>
recognize your mobile phone; at the end of the pairing process you'll see a screen with checkbox that says
<menuchoice><guimenu>Access the Internet using your mobile phone</guimenu></menuchoice>. After checking that box, a progress indicator will appear and say
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ cont. Wired Section
<section id="sect-User_Guide-Wired_Security">
<title>802.1x Tab</title>
<para>
-Use this tab if you want cipher your Ethernet communications (default is unset)
+Use this tab if you want to cipher your Ethernet communications (default is unset)
</para>
</section>
<section id="sect-User_Guide-Connecting_to_the_Internet-Items_Editing_IPv4">
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ For most providers, the <guilabel>Service</guilabel> entry should be left blank.
<section id="sect-User_Guide-Connecting_to_the_Internet-NM_CLI">
<title>Network Manager in a CLI</title>
<para>
-For those users who prefer the command line, Fedora 13 introduces two new tools for managing networks with Network Manager at the command line.
+For those users who prefer the command line, Fedora 13 introduced two new tools for managing networks with Network Manager at the command line.
</para>
<section id="sect-User_Guide-Connecting_to_the_Internet-nmcli">
<title>nmcli</title>
@@ -578,7 +578,7 @@ NM WWAN: enabled
</screen>
<para>
Refer to
-<command>man NetworkManager</command>
+<command>man nmcli</command>
for more information.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Media.xml b/en-US/Media.xml
index 6c7919f..e557acd 100644
--- a/en-US/Media.xml
+++ b/en-US/Media.xml
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ When you are ready to burn your CD/DVD, select the image or media at the bottom
# yum install liveusb-creator
</screen>
<para>
- To open <application>liveusb-creator</application> click on <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications </guimenu><guisubmenu> System Tools </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> liveusb-creator</guisubmenu></menuchoice>. To create live USB media,
+ To open <application>liveusb-creator</application> click on <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications </guimenu><guisubmenu> System Tools </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> FEDORA LiveUSB Creator</guisubmenu></menuchoice>. To create live USB media,
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
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