[deployment-guide/comm-rel: 73/727] PackageKit: fix BZ#561606, QA review items

[Jaromir Hradilek]

commit 900441739831f6581daff4945b569f129edac7c4
Author: Douglas Silas <dhensley at redhat.com>
Date:   Tue Jul 20 00:10:18 2010 +0200

    PackageKit: fix BZ#561606, QA review items

 en-US/PackageKit.xml |   14 +++++++-------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/PackageKit.xml b/en-US/PackageKit.xml
index 7c65fe0..2bf9c5b 100644
--- a/en-US/PackageKit.xml
+++ b/en-US/PackageKit.xml
@@ -90,14 +90,14 @@
         </textobject>
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
-    <para>The updates presented in the <guilabel>Software Updates</guilabel> window only represent the currently-installed packages on your system for which updates are available<indexterm><primary>packages</primary>
+    <para>The updates presented in the <guilabel>Software Updates</guilabel> window only represent the currently-installed packages on your system for which updates are available;<indexterm><primary>packages</primary>
         <secondary>updating currently installed packages</secondary>
         <tertiary>available updates</tertiary>
       </indexterm>
       <indexterm>
         <primary>updating currently installed packages</primary>
         <secondary>available updates</secondary>
-      </indexterm>; dependencies of those packages, whether they are existing packages on your system or new ones, are not shown until you click <guibutton>Install Updates</guibutton>.</para>
+      </indexterm>dependencies of those packages, whether they are existing packages on your system or new ones, are not shown until you click <guibutton>Install Updates</guibutton>.</para>
     <para>
       <application>PackageKit</application>
       <indexterm>
@@ -394,7 +394,7 @@
                 <primary>packages</primary>
                 <secondary>filtering with PackageKit</secondary>
                 <tertiary>only native packages</tertiary>
-              </indexterm> box on a multilib system causes <application>PackageKit</application> to omit listing results for packages compiled for the architecture that runs in <emphasis>compatibility mode</emphasis>. For example, enabling this filter on a 64-bit system with an AMD64 CPU would cause all packages built for the 32-bit x86 CPU architecture not to be shown in the list of results, even though those packages are able to run on an AMD64 machine. Packages which are architecture-agnostic (i.e. <firstterm>noarch</firstterm> packages such as <filename>crontabs-1.10-32.1.el6.noarch.rpm</filename>) are never filtered out by checking <guimenuitem>Only native packages</guimenuitem>. This filter has no affect on non-multilib systems, such as <replaceable>x</replaceable>86 machines.</para>
+              </indexterm> box on a multilib system causes <application>PackageKit</application> to omit listing results for packages compiled for the architecture that runs in <emphasis>compatibility mode</emphasis>. For example, enabling this filter on a 64-bit system with an AMD64 CPU would cause all packages built for the 32-bit x86 CPU architecture not to be shown in the list of results, even though those packages are able to run on an AMD64 machine. Packages which are architecture-agnostic (i.e. <firstterm>noarch</firstterm> packages such as <filename>crontabs-1.10-32.1.el6.noarch.rpm</filename>) are never filtered out by checking <guimenuitem>Only native packages</guimenuitem>. This filter has no affect on non-multilib systems, such as x86 machines.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
       </variablelist>
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@
         </caption>
       </mediaobject>
       <para>
-        <application>htop</application> is nifty, but we decide that <command>top</command> is good enough for us and we want to uninstall it. Remembering that we need to change the <guibutton>Only installed</guibutton> filter we recently used to install it to <guibutton>Only installed</guibutton> in <menuchoice><guimenu>Filters</guimenu>
+        <application>htop</application> is nifty, but we decide that <command>top</command> is good enough for us and we want to uninstall it. Remembering that we need to change the <guibutton>Only available</guibutton> filter we recently used to install it to <guibutton>Only installed</guibutton> in <menuchoice><guimenu>Filters</guimenu>
           <guimenuitem>Installed</guimenuitem>
         </menuchoice>, we search for <application>htop</application> again and uncheck it. The program did not install any dependencies of its own; if it had, those would be automatically removed as well, as long as they were not also dependencies of any other packages still installed on our system.</para>
       <warning
@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@
           </textobject>
         </mediaobject>
       </figure>
-      <para>Similarly, installed package groups can be uninstalled by selecting <guilabel>Package collections</guilabel>, unchecking the appropriate checkbox, and <guibutton>Apply</guibutton>ing.</para>
+      <para>Similarly, installed package groups can be uninstalled by selecting <guilabel>Package collections</guilabel>, unchecking the appropriate checkbox, and applying.</para>
     </section>
     <section
       id="sec-Viewing_the_Transaction_Log">
@@ -650,8 +650,8 @@
               <menuchoice>
                 <guimenu>System</guimenu>
                   <guimenuitem>Preferences</guimenuitem>
-                  <guimenuitem>Session and Startup</guimenuitem>
-                </menuchoice>, <guilabel>Application Autostart</guilabel> tab</para>
+                  <guimenuitem>Startup Applications</guimenuitem>
+                </menuchoice>, <guilabel>Startup Programs</guilabel> tab</para>
             </entry>
             <entry>gpk-update-icon</entry>
           </row>