[deployment-guide/comm-rel: 459/727] Extended the chapter introduction.

[Jaromir Hradilek]

commit b93992821ef712521e3ea540d2612cafb22b85d9
Author: Jaromir Hradilek <jhradile at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Aug 23 16:27:06 2010 +0200

    Extended the chapter introduction.

 en-US/The_Apache_HTTP_Server.xml |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/The_Apache_HTTP_Server.xml b/en-US/The_Apache_HTTP_Server.xml
index 75873da..78c810d 100644
--- a/en-US/The_Apache_HTTP_Server.xml
+++ b/en-US/The_Apache_HTTP_Server.xml
@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@
     <see><application>Apache HTTP Server</application></see>
   </indexterm>
   <para>
-    <systemitem class="protocol">HTTP</systemitem> (Hypertext Transfer Protocol) server, or a <firstterm>web server</firstterm>, is a network service that delivers content such as web pages to clients over the web.
+    <systemitem class="protocol">HTTP</systemitem> (Hypertext Transfer Protocol) server, or a <firstterm>web server</firstterm>, is a network service that serves content to a client over the web. This typically means web pages, but any other documents can be delivered as well.
   </para>
   <para>
-    This chapter covers the <application>Apache HTTP Server</application>, a robust, full-featured open source web server developed by the <ulink url="http://www.apache.org/">Apache Software Foundation</ulink>, that is included in &MAJOROSVER;. It covers the basic configuration of the <systemitem class="service">httpd</systemitem> service, as well as advanced topics such as adding server modules, setting up virtual hosts, and configuring the secure HTTP server.
+    This chapter focuses on the <application>Apache HTTP Server</application>, a robust, full-featured open source web server developed by the <ulink url="http://www.apache.org/">Apache Software Foundation</ulink>, that is included in &MAJOROSVER;. It describes the basic configuration of the <systemitem class="service">httpd</systemitem> service, and covers advanced topics such as adding server modules, setting up virtual hosts, or configuring the secure HTTP server.
   </para>
   <section id="s1-httpd-v2">
     <title>Apache HTTP Server 2.2</title>
@@ -2372,7 +2372,7 @@ SSLCertificateKeyFile /etc/pki/tls/private/www.example.com.key</screen>
           <term><ulink url="http://www.modssl.org/" /></term>
           <listitem>
             <para>
-              The official website for <application>mod_ssl</application>.
+              The official website for the <application>mod_ssl</application> module.
             </para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>