[deployment-guide/comm-rel: 460/727] Adjusted the chapter introduction a bit more.

Jaromir Hradilek jhradile at fedoraproject.org
Tue Oct 19 13:03:31 UTC 2010


commit e0f2843e44637bcf4aa883f1905f53c756281c40
Author: Jaromir Hradilek <jhradile at redhat.com>
Date:   Tue Aug 24 10:21:56 2010 +0200

    Adjusted the chapter introduction a bit more.
    
    I hate this chapter, really.

 en-US/The_Apache_HTTP_Server.xml |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/The_Apache_HTTP_Server.xml b/en-US/The_Apache_HTTP_Server.xml
index 78c810d..fde6e8c 100644
--- a/en-US/The_Apache_HTTP_Server.xml
+++ b/en-US/The_Apache_HTTP_Server.xml
@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@
     <see><application>Apache HTTP Server</application></see>
   </indexterm>
   <para>
-    <systemitem class="protocol">HTTP</systemitem> (Hypertext Transfer Protocol) server, or a <firstterm>web server</firstterm>, is a network service that serves content to a client over the web. This typically means web pages, but any other documents can be delivered as well.
+    <systemitem class="protocol">HTTP</systemitem> (Hypertext Transfer Protocol) server, or a <firstterm>web server</firstterm>, is a network service that serves content to a client over the web. This typically means web pages, but any other documents can be served as well.
   </para>
   <para>
-    This chapter focuses on the <application>Apache HTTP Server</application>, a robust, full-featured open source web server developed by the <ulink url="http://www.apache.org/">Apache Software Foundation</ulink>, that is included in &MAJOROSVER;. It describes the basic configuration of the <systemitem class="service">httpd</systemitem> service, and covers advanced topics such as adding server modules, setting up virtual hosts, or configuring the secure HTTP server.
+    This chapter focuses on the <application>Apache HTTP Server 2.2</application>, a robust, full-featured open source web server developed by the <ulink url="http://www.apache.org/">Apache Software Foundation</ulink>, that is included in &MAJOROSVER;. It describes the basic configuration of the <systemitem class="service">httpd</systemitem> service, and covers advanced topics such as adding server modules, setting up virtual hosts, or configuring the secure HTTP server.
   </para>
   <section id="s1-httpd-v2">
     <title>Apache HTTP Server 2.2</title>


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