[deployment-guide/comm-rel: 696/727] Modified the OpenLDAP Features section.

[Jaromir Hradilek]

commit ad61d507dabcfd2748de743a759556e9a0274696
Author: Jaromir Hradilek <jhradile at redhat.com>
Date:   Wed Sep 29 17:28:52 2010 +0200

    Modified the OpenLDAP Features section.

 .../Lightweight_Directory_Access_Protocol_LDAP.xml |   14 +++++++-------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Lightweight_Directory_Access_Protocol_LDAP.xml b/en-US/Lightweight_Directory_Access_Protocol_LDAP.xml
index 551dac4..b9a8f47 100644
--- a/en-US/Lightweight_Directory_Access_Protocol_LDAP.xml
+++ b/en-US/Lightweight_Directory_Access_Protocol_LDAP.xml
@@ -71,37 +71,37 @@
     <section id="s1-ldap-v3">
       <title>OpenLDAP Features</title>
       <para>
-        OpenLDAP includes a number of important features.
+        The OpenLDAP suite provides a number of important features:
       </para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <emphasis>LDAPv3 Support</emphasis> — OpenLDAP supports Simple Authentication and Security Layer (SASL), Transport Layer Security (TLS), and Secure Sockets Layer (SSL), among other improvements. Many of the changes in the protocol since LDAPv2 are designed to make LDAP more secure.
+            <emphasis>LDAPv3 Support</emphasis> — Many of the changes in the protocol since LDAP version 2 are designed to make LDAP more secure. Among other improvements, this includes the support for Simple Authentication and Security Layer (<acronym>SASL</acronym>), Transport Layer Security (<acronym>TLS</acronym>), and Secure Sockets Layer (<acronym>SSL</acronym>) protocols.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <emphasis>IPv6 Support</emphasis> — OpenLDAP supports the next generation Internet Protocol version 6.
+            <emphasis>LDAP Over IPC</emphasis> — The use of inter-process communication (<acronym>IPC</acronym>) enhances security by eliminating the need to communicate over a network.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <emphasis>LDAP Over IPC</emphasis> — OpenLDAP can communicate within a system using interprocess communication (IPC). This enhances security by eliminating the need to communicate over a network.
+            <emphasis>IPv6 Support</emphasis> — OpenLDAP is compiant with Internet Protocol version 6 (<acronym>IPv6</acronym>), the next generation of the Internet Protocol.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <emphasis>Updated C API</emphasis> — Improves the way programmers can connect to and use LDAP directory servers.
+            <emphasis>LDIFv1 Support</emphasis> — OpenLDAP is fully compliant with LDIF version 1.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <emphasis>LDIFv1 Support</emphasis> — Provides full compliance with the LDAP Data Interchange Format (LDIF) version 1.
+            <emphasis>Updated C API</emphasis> — The current C API improves the way programmers can connect to and use LDAP directory servers.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <emphasis>Enhanced Stand-Alone LDAP Server</emphasis> — Includes an updated access control system, thread pooling, better tools, and much more.
+            <emphasis>Enhanced Stand-Alone LDAP Server</emphasis> — This includes an updated access control system, thread pooling, better tools, and much more.
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>