[user-guide: 2/3] minor updates with F14 fact checking

Susan Lauber laubersm at fedoraproject.org
Thu Oct 21 02:15:49 UTC 2010


commit 7d756a940bc0f40ae3fcb64b2bcb5bf26283873d
Author: Susan Lauber <laubersm at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Wed Oct 20 22:14:24 2010 -0400

    minor updates with F14 fact checking

 en-US/Accessing_the_Web.xml |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Accessing_the_Web.xml b/en-US/Accessing_the_Web.xml
index d004d80..f487b8a 100644
--- a/en-US/Accessing_the_Web.xml
+++ b/en-US/Accessing_the_Web.xml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 <chapter id="chap-User_Guide-Accessing_the_Web">
 	<title>Accessing the Web</title>
 	<para>
-		For Fedora, <application>Mozilla Firefox</application> is the default web browser when using GNOME, and <application>Konqueror</application> is the default web browser when using KDE. These broweser are used to access the <firstterm>Internet</firstterm> (World Wide Web). There are many other browsers available to suit different users' needs. <application>Dillo</application> is an example of a lightweight browser, and browsers such as <application>lynx</application>, <application>w3m</application>, and <application>elinks</application> are console based.
+		For Fedora, <application>Mozilla Firefox</application> is the default web browser when using GNOME, and <application>Konqueror</application> is the default web browser when using KDE. These browsers are used to access the <firstterm>Internet</firstterm> (World Wide Web). There are many other browsers available to suit different users' needs. <application>Dillo</application> is an example of a lightweight browser, and browsers such as <application>lynx</application>, <application>w3m</application>, and <application>elinks</application> are console based.
 	</para>
 	<para>
 		Besides being standards-compliant web browsers, <application>Firefox</application> and <application>Konqueror</application> have many features beyond basic web browsing. This chapter explains how to use some of the more popular features, and provides links to further information.
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 		<section id="sect-User_Guide-Browsing_web_pages-Using_Firefox">
 			<title>Using Firefox</title>
 			<para>
-				<!--                                                                                                                                       [[Image:Docs_Drafts_DesktopUserGuide_Web_firefoxicon.png]]                                                                                                                                        --> To start <application>Firefox</application> in GNOME, select <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guisubmenu>Internet</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>Firefox Web Browser</guisubmenu></menuchoice> or use the menu panel icon. To start <application>Firefox</application> in KDE, select <menuchoice><guimenu>KMenu </guimenu><guisubmenu> Applications </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Internet </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Firefox Web Browser</guisubmenu></menuchoice>.
+			 	To start <application>Firefox</application> in GNOME, select <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guisubmenu>Internet</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>Firefox</guisubmenu></menuchoice> or use the menu panel icon. To start <application>Firefox</application> in KDE, select <menuchoice><guimenu>KMenu </guimenu><guisubmenu> Applications </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Internet </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Firefox</guisubmenu></menuchoice>.
 			</para>
 			<para>
 				<application>Firefox</application> has many more features than discussed here; you can find more information on <application>Firefox</application> at the Mozilla Firefox website: <ulink url="http://www.mozilla.org/support/firefox/">http://www.mozilla.org/support/firefox/</ulink>.
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
 			<title>Using Konqueror</title>
 			<!--                                                                                                                                       [[Image:Docs_Drafts_DesktopUserGuide_Web_konqueror.png]]                                                                                                                                       -->
 			<para>
-				To start <application>Konqueror</application> in KDE, select <menuchoice><guimenu>KMenu </guimenu><guisubmenu> Applications </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Internet </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Konqueror</guisubmenu></menuchoice>. To start <application>Konqueror</application> in GNOME, select <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications </guimenu><guisubmenu> Internet </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Konqueror</guisubmenu></menuchoice>.
+				To start <application>Konqueror</application> in KDE, select <menuchoice><guimenu>KMenu </guimenu><guisubmenu> Applications </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Internet </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Web Browser</guisubmenu></menuchoice>. To start <application>Konqueror</application> in GNOME, select <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications </guimenu><guisubmenu> Internet </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Konqueror</guisubmenu></menuchoice>.
 			</para>
 			<note>
 				<title>Konqueror on the GNOME and Xfce desktops</title>
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@
 			<section id="sect-User_Guide-FTP_on_the_command_line-Connecting_to_an_FTP_server">
 				<title>Connecting to an FTP server</title>
 				<para>
-					Use the <command>open</command> command to connect to an FTP server. The syntax for this is <command>open</command> <command> <replaceable>ftp.server.com port</replaceable></command> where <replaceable>ftp.server.com</replaceable> is the server you want to connect to. Only specify a port if you are connecting to a server that uses a non-default port(the default is 21). Alternatively, you can connect to an FTP server as you start the <application>ftp</application> program. To do this, use the syntax <command>ftp ftp.server.com port</command>, where the port option is optional.
+					Use the <command>open</command> command to connect to an FTP server. The syntax for this is <command>open</command> <command> <replaceable>ftp.server.com port</replaceable></command> where <replaceable>ftp.server.com</replaceable> is the server you want to connect to. Only specify a port if you are connecting to a server that uses a non-default port (the default is 21). Alternatively, you can connect to an FTP server as you start the <application>ftp</application> program. To do this, use the syntax <command>ftp ftp.server.com port</command>, where the port option is optional.
 				</para>
 			</section>
 			


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