en-US/Developer_Tools.xml en-US/Embedded_Development.xml en-US/Networking.xml en-US/Release_Notes.xml en-US/Revision_History.xml
John J. McDonough
jjmcd at fedoraproject.org
Mon Sep 13 21:41:20 UTC 2010
en-US/Developer_Tools.xml | 8 ++++----
en-US/Embedded_Development.xml | 4 ++--
en-US/Networking.xml | 8 ++++----
en-US/Release_Notes.xml | 14 ++++++++++++++
en-US/Revision_History.xml | 14 ++++++++++++++
5 files changed, 38 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
New commits:
commit 1a3b3aa39b90d9b4ca0ac1fb0fb56d782bcd0195
Author: John J. McDonough <jjmcd at fedoraproject.org>
Date: Mon Sep 13 17:38:46 2010 -0400
Fix typos, remove blank sections
- A number of small typos were corrected in
- Developer Tools
- Networking
- Embedded Development
- Release_Notes was modified to comment out a number of sections
which were lacking content
- Revision history was updated
diff --git a/en-US/Developer_Tools.xml b/en-US/Developer_Tools.xml
index cfd489c..9757621 100644
--- a/en-US/Developer_Tools.xml
+++ b/en-US/Developer_Tools.xml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
]>
<section id="sect-Release_Notes-Development_Tools">
- <title>Development_Tools</title>
+ <title>Development Tools</title>
<section>
<title>D Programming Language</title>
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ For more informations:
<listitem>
<para>
python upgrade/downgrade scripts do not import
- migrate_engine magically, but recieve engine as the only
+ migrate_engine magically, but receive engine as the only
parameter to function (eg. def
<methodname>upgrade(migrate_engine):</methodname>)
</para>
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ For more informations:
<indexterm><primary>gdb</primary></indexterm>
<para>
<package>gdb</package> has been enhanced to remove the
- unncecssary indices from the <filename>.debug</filename> files,
+ unncecessary indices from the <filename>.debug</filename> files,
and will replace them with an index that greatly speeds up
<package>gdb</package>.
</para>
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ For more informations:
<secondary>bash</secondary>
</indexterm>
<para>
- The Lisp sources for the <package>emacs</package> bash deugger,
+ The Lisp sources for the <package>emacs</package> bash debugger,
<package>emacs-bashdb-el</package> are now included in Fedora.
The debugger has been upgraded to version 4.1_0.4.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Embedded_Development.xml b/en-US/Embedded_Development.xml
index dd339fb..4c6dcb3 100644
--- a/en-US/Embedded_Development.xml
+++ b/en-US/Embedded_Development.xml
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
<indexterm><primary>EECP</primary></indexterm>
<indexterm><primary>DS1307</primary></indexterm>
<para>
- <package>gpsim</package> has been updated to 0.25. In additon
+ <package>gpsim</package> has been updated to 0.25. In addition
to many bugfixes, new features include:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- video module resurected
+ video module resurrected
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
diff --git a/en-US/Networking.xml b/en-US/Networking.xml
index 5aca173..ef291ab 100644
--- a/en-US/Networking.xml
+++ b/en-US/Networking.xml
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
<para>
Version 7 of <package>awstats</package> beta is now available.
This version allows detection of Windows 7 clients, can format
- numbers according to localization, and many oter new features.
+ numbers according to localization, and many other new features.
These are detailed in the <ulink
url="http://awstats.sourceforge.net/docs/awstats_changelog.txt">
awstats-changelog</ulink>.
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
Fedora 14 now includes <package>chatzilla</package>, an IRC
- client. <package>chatzilla</package> may be installed alonne,
+ client. <package>chatzilla</package> may be installed alone,
or with <package>chatzilla-gnome</package>, allowing
<code>irc:</code> addresses to be handled in GNOME.
</para>
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
<package>maildirproc</package> is a mail processing agent, with
- similar functionality to <package>procmail</package>, bu tunlike
+ similar functionality to <package>procmail</package>, but unlike
<package>procmail</package>, <package>maildirproc</package>
operates on already delivered mail. For more information visit
<ulink url="http://joel.rosdahl.net/maildirproc/">
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
<primary>openconnect</primary>
</indexterm>
<para>
- <package>openconnect</package> has been upgraded from verions
+ <package>openconnect</package> has been upgraded from version
2.22 to 2.24. In addition to bugfixes, there are a number of
security enhancements. The full details may be reviewed at
<ulink url="http://www.infradead.org/openconnect.html">
diff --git a/en-US/Release_Notes.xml b/en-US/Release_Notes.xml
index c9f1fe0..11662c9 100644
--- a/en-US/Release_Notes.xml
+++ b/en-US/Release_Notes.xml
@@ -21,12 +21,14 @@
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
</section>
+<!--
<xi:include href="Installer.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
<xi:include href="Arch_Specific.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+-->
<section id="sect-Release_Notes-Changes_for_Desktop_Users">
<title>Changes in Fedora for Desktop Users</title>
<xi:include href="Desktop.xml"
@@ -35,9 +37,11 @@
<xi:include href="Networking.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+<!--
<xi:include href="Printing.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+-->
<xi:include href="I18n.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
@@ -47,9 +51,11 @@
<xi:include href="Entertainment.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+<!--
<xi:include href="Live_Image.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+-->
</section>
<section id="sect-Release_Notes-Changes_for_SysAdmin">
@@ -66,6 +72,7 @@
<xi:include href="Web_Servers.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+<!--
<xi:include href="Mail_Servers.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
@@ -81,9 +88,11 @@
<xi:include href="System_Daemons.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+-->
<xi:include href="Server_Configuration_Tools.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+<!--
<xi:include href="File_Systems.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
@@ -93,6 +102,7 @@
<xi:include href="Cluster.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+-->
</section>
<section id="sect-Release_Notes-Changes_for_Developers">
@@ -118,9 +128,11 @@
<xi:include href="Development_Eclipse.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+<!--
<xi:include href="Backwards_Compatibility.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+-->
<xi:include href="Kernel.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
@@ -134,9 +146,11 @@
<xi:include href="Circuit_Design.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+<!--
<xi:include href="EDA.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
+-->
<xi:include href="Embedded_Development.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
</xi:include>
diff --git a/en-US/Revision_History.xml b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
index 15fd64e..c04c34b 100644
--- a/en-US/Revision_History.xml
+++ b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
@@ -8,6 +8,20 @@
<simpara>
<revhistory>
<revision>
+ <revnumber>13.95</revnumber>
+ <date>Mon Sep 13 2010</date>
+ <author>
+ <firstname>John</firstname>
+ <surname>McDonough</surname>
+ <email>jjmcd at fedoraproject.org</email>
+ </author>
+ <revdescription>
+ <simplelist>
+ <member>Preparation for beta release</member>
+ </simplelist>
+ </revdescription>
+ </revision>
+ <revision>
<revnumber>0</revnumber>
<date>Sat Sep 4 2010</date>
<author>
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