[user-guide] Begin updating 'Tour of the GNOME desktop' for GNOME 3

Nathan Thomas nathant at fedoraproject.org
Thu Aug 11 08:44:26 UTC 2011


commit ad4e04906696ba9711948e379f44ebbc5e2a3921
Author: Nathan Thomas <nathan at afternoondust.co.uk>
Date:   Thu Aug 11 10:43:45 2011 +0200

    Begin updating 'Tour of the GNOME desktop' for GNOME 3

 en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml |   13 +++++--------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml b/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
index 66fbb5f..5a66a04 100644
--- a/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
+++ b/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
@@ -26,11 +26,11 @@
 			</mediaobject>
 		</figure>
 		<para>
-			The GNOME Desktop has three distinct areas. From top to bottom, they are: 
+			When you first log in to The GNOME Desktop, you will see two distinct areas: 
 			<itemizedlist>
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						the <firstterm>Top Menu Panel</firstterm> (the gray bar at the top).
+						the <firstterm>Top Bar</firstterm> (the black bar at the top).
 					</para>
 				</listitem>
 				<listitem>
@@ -38,13 +38,10 @@
 						the <firstterm>Desktop Area</firstterm> (the workspace area in the center that fills most of the screen).
 					</para>
 				</listitem>
-				<listitem>
-					<para>
-						the <firstterm>Window List Panel</firstterm> (the gray bar at the bottom).
-					</para>
-				</listitem>
-			</itemizedlist>
+		</itemizedlist>
 		</para>
+		<para>A third area can be accessed by clicking the <guimenuitem>Activities</guimenuitem> button, or by moving the mouse to the top left hand <firstterm>Hot Corner</firstterm>. Alternatively, you can press the <firstterm>windows key</firstterm> on your keyboard. This area is called the <firstterm>Activities overview</firstterm>.
+
 		<section id="sect-User_Guide-_The_GNOME_desktop_-_The_top_menu_panel_">
 			<!--                                                                                                                                                    The top menu panel                                                                                                                                                    --><title> The Top Menu Panel </title>
 			<para>


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